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*Emerald Misted Reverie* |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments 
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Among the tender boughs Gentle voices falling, flitting Landing where dreams allow. Spring fed waters slowly trickle Upon the sprouting green Silvered rays dancing, streaming As magic lays unseen. Azure feathers softly spread Over the moistened ground Forgotten wisdom speaking, chanting Whispers drifting heaven bound. Luscious fragrance laced Throughout the verdant vines Fragile spirits wishing, longing For a trace of abandoned time. My muse's lovely giggle Carried by the twirling breeze My silent soul wandering, floating To my emerald-misted reverie. Here my tranquil soul can be Flying quietly, forever free. *Krista Knutson* ~*Only when trudging through the soul's darkest midnight can one truly appreciate the glory of the sunrise*~ [This message has been edited by Alwye (edited 03-26-2000).] |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
wow pretty powerful and potent poem miss alwye very serene |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Alwye, Pretty indeed and beautiful, great imagery. Loved it.  What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Alwye~ This is ABSOLUTELY beautiful ! Your Muse fairly dances across the page. Lovely, I tell you ... lovely. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Dusk Treader
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since 1999-06-18
Posts 1187St. Paul, MN |
What a scene you've painted for us Krista. Absolutely beautiful poem Krista. Abrahm Simons Put one foot on the path of life and tread the dagger's path betwixt dark and light. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
What a lovely sylvan portrait you paint, my friend - What masterpieces will you be conjuring up when your older??...  |
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Panthers Chrysalis Member
since 2000-03-25
Posts 51 |
Terrific poem! So enchantingly descriptive! |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
krista, Breathtakingly beautiful. You give quite a vision here. Believe me, I see the magic... Michael |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Thank you all so much!  *Krista Knutson* ~*Only when trudging through the soul's darkest midnight can one truly appreciate the glory of the sunrise*~ |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Lovely poem to match the lovely title |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Your muse is quite happy, Alwye! |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
*applause* enjoyed muchly, very well done. |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Thank you all, I appreciate your kindness. *Krista Knutson* ~*Only when trudging through the soul's darkest midnight can one truly appreciate the glory of the sunrise*~ |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
How lovely, Krista...this poem breathes magic. ~ Claire |
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