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Alwye

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In the space between moments

0 posted 2000-03-26 12:34 PM

Sylvan deities lightly waft
Among the tender boughs
Gentle voices falling, flitting
Landing where dreams allow.

Spring fed waters slowly trickle
Upon the sprouting green
Silvered rays dancing, streaming
As magic lays unseen.

Azure feathers softly spread
Over the moistened ground
Forgotten wisdom speaking, chanting
Whispers drifting heaven bound.

Luscious fragrance laced
Throughout the verdant vines
Fragile spirits wishing, longing
For a trace of abandoned time.

My muse's lovely giggle
Carried by the twirling breeze
My silent soul wandering, floating
To my emerald-misted reverie.

Here my tranquil soul can be
Flying quietly, forever free.

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*Krista Knutson*

~*Only when trudging through the soul's darkest midnight can one truly appreciate the glory of the sunrise*~

[This message has been edited by Alwye (edited 03-26-2000).]

wayoutwalt
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1 posted 2000-03-26 12:42 PM

wow pretty powerful and potent poem miss alwye very serene

Dark Angel
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2 posted 2000-03-26 01:06 AM

Alwye, Pretty indeed and beautiful, great imagery. Loved it.

What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge

Marge Tindal

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3 posted 2000-03-26 01:55 AM

Alwye~
This is ABSOLUTELY beautiful !
Your Muse fairly dances across the page.
Lovely, I tell you ... lovely.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Dusk Treader

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4 posted 2000-03-26 02:46 PM

What a scene you've painted for us Krista. Absolutely beautiful poem Krista.

Abrahm Simons

Put one foot on the path of life and tread the dagger's path betwixt dark and light.

Nan

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5 posted 2000-03-26 04:36 PM

What a lovely sylvan portrait you paint, my friend - What masterpieces will you be conjuring up when your older??...

Panthers Chrysalis
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6 posted 2000-03-26 06:30 PM

Terrific poem! So enchantingly descriptive!

Michael

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7 posted 2000-03-26 07:00 PM

krista, Breathtakingly beautiful. You give quite a vision here. Believe me, I see the magic...

Michael

Alwye

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In the space between moments

8 posted 2000-03-26 10:00 PM

Thank you all so much!

*Krista Knutson*

~*Only when trudging through the soul's darkest midnight can one truly appreciate the glory of the sunrise*~

hoot_owl_rn
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9 posted 2000-03-27 10:28 AM

Lovely poem to match the lovely title

Sunshine

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10 posted 2000-03-27 12:08 PM

Your muse is quite happy, Alwye!

Mike
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11 posted 2000-03-27 05:54 PM

*applause* enjoyed muchly, very well done.

Alwye

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In the space between moments

12 posted 2000-03-27 09:57 PM

Thank you all, I appreciate your kindness.

*Krista Knutson*

~*Only when trudging through the soul's darkest midnight can one truly appreciate the glory of the sunrise*~

Meadowmuse
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13 posted 2000-03-27 10:14 PM

How lovely, Krista...this poem breathes magic.

~ Claire

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