Open Poetry #6 |
Panther in the Snow |
Panthers Chrysalis Member
since 2000-03-25
Posts 51 |
She arises.... and dances on the wings of fantasy... leaving brushstrokes of her desires in the virgin snow she revels in the ecstasy of her movements and rejoices in the echoes of her dreams her heartbeat quickens to the evolutions of her soul feeding her existence embellishing her moves with a sudden inexplicable urgent tendency to incorporate her passions into her dance building and heightening her frenzied rhythms til she collapses exhausted as the snow caresses her cheek and she sleeps til she awakens for the encore |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Panther~ This is just beautiful. So serene and lovely. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Panthers Chrysalis Member
since 2000-03-25
Posts 51 |
Thanks, Marge! You brightened my day! |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! This is wonderful writing. Please check your email for a special welcome! |
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Panthers Chrysalis Member
since 2000-03-25
Posts 51 |
Thanks for the warm welcome, Poet deVine! |
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David2 Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 407 |
Panther, I loved the word usage here. Very vivid imagery. Welcome ! David2 |
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VampDude Junior Member
since 2000-03-24
Posts 21Canada |
Beautiful poem and great imagery, great work! "So close, no matter how far, couldn't be much more from the heart, forever trusting who we are, and nothing else matters" -Metallica- |
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Panthers Chrysalis Member
since 2000-03-25
Posts 51 |
David2 and VampDude.... Thank you both for taking the time to read, and comment! Glad you enjoyed it! |
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Windrider Silverbreeze Junior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 33 |
Wellcome to Passions, very well envisioned. |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
"She dances on wings of fantasy.." Very nice indeed - Welcome to Passions.. |
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Panthers Chrysalis Member
since 2000-03-25
Posts 51 |
Windrider Silverbreeze Thank you for the welcome!... Happy to be here.. |
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Panthers Chrysalis Member
since 2000-03-25
Posts 51 |
Nan...Thank you! Good thing she treads lightly... |
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