Open Poetry #6 |
Gentle Touch |
vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Your gentle touch, You touched me, You love me , And you say you're in love with me, Because I was the one to make you happy, Your sweet smile makes crazy, You love me all day And when I'm alone, I feel so lost, When you're not here, to touch you, I feel empty, And lost, But you come to me, you touch me and talk to me with your loving voice, Your gentle touch makes crazy, you take my hand, you say you love me, your gentle touch and when you whisper into my ears, I feel so lost in love, Sometimes I wonder why you love me so much, But you give me an answer for the question I've inside my heart, Your gentle touch Gentle Touch |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Ah, soft and sweet....VERY nice. INclan |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is so sweet, Vandana! Very lovely! Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
VanDana~ This is so sweet and lovely. Seems things in Atlanta are good. Alive with the ~Spring~ing of love in bloom. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Ah..a gentle touch....very good. |
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VampDude Junior Member
since 2000-03-24
Posts 21Canada |
A gentle touch... one of the many great things that come with love.. VERY nice poem, vandana! "So close, no matter how far, couldn't be much more from the heart, forever trusting who we are, and nothing else matters" -Metallica- |
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Windrider Silverbreeze Junior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 33 |
With the coming of spring, Love blooms anew, As the words are written, And felt only by you. May loves weet embrace, Tender unto you all, And keep you safe for the coming of Fall, Springs love sends, A new hope and praise, One's we'll remember... The rest of our days. (Very well written and swseet poem. Keep writting) |
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