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First Love - One Love
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First Love - One Love |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia 
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FIRST LOVE - ONE LOVE David, you were my heart and soul How I longed for you to hold me How I longed for you to know Just how much I loved you Why did you have to go I have grown into a woman now And I know you would be proud But oh to see your smiling face In amongst a crowd...... Roniece Dawson-Bruce |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Those first loves have the greatest impact on us, don't they? Even long after they are gone. Denise |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Roniece~ Oh, what a sweet piece. I remember that 'first love' and I'm fortunate enough to run into him from time to time. Hope you get to do that also. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wow...what a wonderful take on first love  |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a beautiful love poem! I LOVE love poems! Keep up the good work!"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Thank you all for your nice comments - my first love was oh so long ago - and although he is with God now I still think of him. Roniece |
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Tess Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 288Australia |
This is a lovely poem capturing that innocence and questioning of a first love "What is a friend? A single soul dwelling in two bodies." -Aristotle |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I'm going to start crying, it seemed so real, so moving....Roneice you need to get writing again!!! Kathleen |
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