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Heaven or Hell ? - The choices we all must make .
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Heaven or Hell ? - The choices we all must make . |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Heaven or Hell ? My eyes are blind, my mind is numb, my soul is down and blue, there's nouthing left for me to do, I feel so confused . My heart is split between two worlds , torn straight down through the mid, the cherubs stopped there holy song, and flew away and hid . The mist has come, in clouds above, the blanket covers me, the truth is gone, this can't be love, that's come to set me free . Angels guard the silent route, upto the glowing gate, I can't let temptation, hamper me, or I'll never reach my fate . But what is this, I have a doubt, growing in my head, don't make me chose, which road to take, or I'll never get it said . Written by Tom Baker |
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silvershaddow Junior Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 19 |
A good inspiration to others. Maybe i'll put a poem of mine up here one day soon. |
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John Yaws Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 860Texas |
Great job, Tom. eloquently written, with good insight. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Choosing temptation, only to find that you were wrong is also part of the game!! You've made quite a statement with this one Tom!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
True words wrapped in such a good poem I like it very much The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Thanks to you all for this positive feedback, I am glad you like this because it is written from the heart to express the situation I have managed to get into . |
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infinat3 sadn3ss Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 85somerset england |
hi bakes you know your poetry is better than i thought!you have to do more for me to llok at cabes |
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cK Navarro Junior Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 21Helsinki Finland |
The worse place to be is being stuck in the middle. Follow your heart -but in which doesn´t mean without your mind. The mind must be used how to best compliment what the heart desired to be done. The mind is sort of like a map of how things are in our world today. So if you wish to bring heaven down, you need a map! Happy Valentine´s day on the wings of love -C- |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Thanks again, Cabe you'll have to put some of your poems up here so that I can enjoy them, I am glad you all enjoyed this . |
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BluesforNarada Junior Member
since 2000-03-02
Posts 13 |
Truly an epic from the heart. An inspiration to us all - we all must make this choice one day, and you have expressed it in the best way. |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Cheers Kev, a a Guiness for me today, sinse it is St Patricks day and all, a good excuss, thanks, I am glad that you liked it, your replies always inspire me to keep writing . L.Of.L . Tom . With poetry as your weapon - express your iner feelings so all may carry your sorrow, united as one . |
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Enola Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 138England |
Hey, what's with putting this back up to the top - the cheek of it. Not that it doesn't deserve another airing. The tragedy of it is that nobody sees the look of desperation on my face. Thousands and thousands of us, and we're passing one another without a look of recognition. |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Sorry Debs, I just thought that it was to good not to show twice ( I pressed the button twice by accident ) . Thanks anyway . With poetry as your weapon - express your iner feelings so all may carry your sorrow, united as one . |
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