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Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
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0 posted 2000-03-24 09:36 AM



Blessed Sunrise


Stroked just so someone the sky.
The colors they used so beautiful
to the eye. It’s as if they painted
from their soul the beauty I
behold.

The grays, reds flowing mixing
shows divine love present this
morn.

This someone blew mist upon
the mountains and valleys
down below, as if to show he
touches the earth with
gracefulness.

Now the sun does peek through
the paint with the bright bursting
of yellow, giving the mountains
a purple glow.

The sounds of nature now ignite
the air, tunes now of every sort
bless this morn, and he who
granted it.

Now fire rains off the western sky,
and what was once soft painted
strokes are now on fire a blaze of
glory on high.

I praise this soul that so deeply
touched my sunrise and gave
my tears fallen heart felt joy.


By,  Cerenity



[This message has been edited by Cerenity-1 (edited 03-24-2000).]

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Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-03-24 10:30 AM


This someone blew mist upon
the mountains and valleys
down below, as if to show he
touches the earth with
gracefulness.
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truly beautiful poem Cerenity...you have painted it in my mind with your poetic pen...
this was lovely to read...
thru your eyes...perfection.
take care, jm


 Do you live by the book, do you play by the rules
Do you care what is thought by others about you
If this day is all that is promised to you
Do you live for the present, the future the past...
tracy chapman


Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
2 posted 2000-03-24 10:39 AM


Hi Janet,

The sunrise trully was blessed this morning or maybe its because I feel in my heart that my life at this moment is blessed.

Thank you for your reply,  Cerenity

Denise
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since 1999-08-22
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3 posted 2000-03-24 12:08 PM


This is a lovely painting of the sunrise, Cerenity! Very very lovely!

Denise

Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
4 posted 2000-03-24 12:43 PM


Hi Denise,

How are you? I am bubbling over with joy today, there is serenity in this heart of mine, May your heart be filled with happieness as mine is.

Thank you for your reply,

Cerenity

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