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angelswing
Senior Member

since 2000-02-10

Posts 705
United Kingdom

0 posted 2000-03-24 04:34 AM

Multi-Coloured spectrum .

Life is deep,
3 dimensions,
are it’s home,
nothing is ever black or white,
only shades of chrome .
It’s light is always moving,
With light you must keep pace,
Or you’ll dwell to long in shadows,
You always, must hold face .
Never quite clear enough,
The sun sets,
The rainbow shades are in your mind,
Not in matter nets,
You know you never can reach,
That massive pot of gold,
You can struggle and can rush,
Just to get hopes fooled,
So just give up,
Settle for that bleak grey,
That surrounds your mind,
Then may be one day,
You will see the sun,
And the full colour to,
That lives in fantasy,
By the abysses darkest rule .
All have a belonging,
A flavour,
And a time,
As clouds float by,
My mind cries .
A tear within,
A terrible din,
My brothers,
And my kin,
Enjoy lives beauty,
Push out the grey,
You never know,
One day .
The ski’s will clear,
Shed no tear,
For the minds deception isn’t so shear .

Written by Tom Baker .

With poetry as your weapon - express your iner feelings so all may carry your sorrow, united as one .

angelswing
Senior Member

since 2000-02-10

Posts 705
United Kingdom

1 posted 2000-03-24 04:37 AM

Sorry about the spelling, when I put this up I was in a bit of a rush !
Enjoy - Tom .

With poetry as your weapon - express your iner feelings so all may carry your sorrow, united as one .

Enola
Member

since 2000-02-11

Posts 138
England

2 posted 2000-03-24 05:34 AM

So just give up,
Settle for that bleak grey,
That surrounds your mind,
Then may be one day,
You will see the sun,

Is it just me, or are you seeing the light (pun not intended? Could it just be that the grey is an entire rainbow that you aren't seeing properly?

The tragedy of it is that nobody sees the look of desperation on my face. Thousands and thousands of us, and we're passing one another without a look of recognition.

TerryW
Senior Member

since 2000-03-23

Posts 779
Louisville, Mississippi, USA

3 posted 2000-03-24 05:30 PM

I like it! the theme rings true! his one is great....

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

4 posted 2000-03-24 05:58 PM

Tom...welcome to passions. It's very simple to correct anything you wish to correct after you've posted by clicking on the edit button at the top of the page...it's the one with the pen and paper. Welcome to passions

Dr.Moose1
Member Elite

since 1999-09-05

Posts 3448
Bewilderment , USA

5 posted 2000-03-24 09:14 PM

Again , welcome to passions ,
An interesting piece ,with an interesting subject . Seek the vibrant colors .
Doc

angelswing
Senior Member

since 2000-02-10

Posts 705
United Kingdom

6 posted 2000-03-29 11:28 AM

Thanks to you all .

Debs - Yes I am seeing the light only it isn't doing me any good .
Terry.W - Cheers mate, I can see that we have alot in common .
Hoot - thanks for the tip .
Doc - Thanks, I am seeking, just not finding .

With poetry as your weapon - express your iner feelings so all may carry your sorrow, united as one .

infinat3 sadn3ss
Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 85
somerset england

7 posted 2000-03-29 01:01 PM

tom
try looking deeper into the abyss of black and you will see it only contains white.your writing has/is improving so much ,and hope thats it keeps up this emotional quality/

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

8 posted 2000-03-29 07:06 PM

Very good...I like this.

angelswing
Senior Member

since 2000-02-10

Posts 705
United Kingdom

9 posted 2000-04-14 04:23 AM

Thank you both for your kind words, I am feeling alot deeper and more wise already, and I can see what your geting at cabe .

With poetry as your weapon - express your iner feelings so all may carry your sorrow, united as one .

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