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Passion Fire |
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DragonFire New Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 7 |
Passion fire the fire of life is the passion that keeps your soul warm it lights your way along the path you travel, keeps the sadness and sorrow at bay, gives you energy to do the most meanial of tasks staring into the flames you see wonders flickering within it's dept you envision the futrure, see fantasies and faeries your soul sighs with longing yet you dare not get too close you fear the fire it has the power to bring you great pain yet like a moth you are drawn unable to resist the mystery yearning for just a touch you cannot hold a flame in your hand, yet to lie beside it, you feel deep in your being the peace, the warmth, the contentment is what your soul seeks to dance with fire your soul is set free it sores and climbs to new heights and you realize, without fire there is only Darkness. Catherine |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
*HUGS* Cath/Dragon Fire I really love this poem. You know I do, it holds a very very special meaning as you do. Keep writing your awsome poems filled with emotion and depth... Forever Yours, Dhuron |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Welcome, Catherine! I loved the last two lines in this well-written poem. Elizabeth "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!" -The Crucible |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to passions! Check your email for something special! This is very good, I look forward to reading more from you.  |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Welcome to passions  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
you cannot hold a flame in your hand, yet to lie beside it, you feel deep in your being the peace, the warmth, the contentment is what your soul seeks --------------- *SIGH* you said it all perfectly for me tonite...welcome to Passions...this poem is lovely...very nice. take care, jm and you can say baby... baby can I hold you tonight maybe if told you the right words... at the right time, you'd be mine... baby can I hold you tonight... tracy chapman |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Catherine, Welcome to Passions! I really love this poem. I have an affinity with fire (I am a sagittarius) and I believe that the true fire of the heart's flame will never burn you -- it is the guide to light the way! Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi DragonFire, This is a wonderful poem, I really enjoyed it. Welcome to passions, Cerenity |
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