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~Seduction Of Words~ sincere thanks :)
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~Seduction Of Words~ sincere thanks :) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
~Seduction Of Words~ < !signature-->Bound by trust, Laced with lust, Intensity defined by intrigue. Longing veiled in verse, Passion's welcomed curse, Rapture adorned in rhyme. Depth of perception Fantasy's sweetest deception, Reverie embraces reality in reprieve. Seduction by prose, Gifted to compose, Inspiration's vows requited. Eyes of desire, Drawn to the fire, A slow burning sensual flame. Discoveries of mutual need, Hunger upon which to feed, Salvation found in sacrifice. Secrets protected and hidden, Tasting pleasures forbidden, Offerings consume and satisfy. Resistance in decline, Submission so divine, Abandon assures absolution. Temptation born of fascination, Captivation by poetic invitation, Surrender entwined in ecstasy. Janet Marie  and you can say baby... baby can I hold you tonight maybe if told you the right words... at the right time, you'd be mine... baby can I hold you tonight... tracy chapman [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 03-24-2000).] |
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David2 Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 407 |
Janet Marie, I simply loved this and especially these lines. Great work! David2 Temptation born of fascination, Captivation by poetic invitation, Surrender entwined in ecstasy. |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
This is one of your best JM! I really like it. Particarly your rhyme scheme. Marina |
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christies heart Member
since 1999-08-10
Posts 189NJ, USA |
I agree with above comments.This is great and provoking! Grant that I may not judge my niegbor until I have walked a mile in his moccasians Native American prayer |
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Tess Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 288Australia |
I love the three line rhyming structure..it gives great rhythm to the words and the way that each verse builds on the next..increasing like the fire image....until the surrender at the end. Tess "What is a friend? A single soul dwelling in two bodies." -Aristotle |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Janet Marie, Oh, what a wonderful poem! I am overwhelmed. Talent galore from your poet pen. Liz |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
The title is appropriate here. The words flow and the seduction is complete. Janet Marie you have such wonderful poetic expression. I study your work hopeing to be that good someday. Thank you for responding to my posts. Danny |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
You couldn't have picked a more perfect title...I absolutely love your word choices in this one  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Perfection again! Almost knocked over the laptop when I gave the screen a "high-five"! Just beautiful, Janet! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Its only words...and words are all I have to seduce your heart away. A true ecstasy. James |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
This was one of your best...I ditto the above remarks!!!  "Love is not love Which alters when it alteration finds, Or bends with the remover to remove. O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Janet Marie~ This is an exquisite piece of poetry, my dear. A favorite it is destined to become. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Wow! Wonderful words..to read and to speak and to listen to. Very well done!! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
JM, this is truly wonderful. . . I can only say that I hope that whoever you have found appreciates the wonder and the desire that shows in these poems. . . . I love this side of you!!! So wonderful to see it!! ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Loneheart Member
since 1999-09-13
Posts 92Eastern US |
JM truly outstanding to say the least Loneheart |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Janet, I was almost knocked over by this one. Such intensity fading to softness, then building in intensity to the crescendo --- you are remarkable! Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I gotta tell you guys...you made my week, month,life, with your replies to this... honestly...I am humbled by ALL of you who encouraged me... You never know which one is one that will evoke something in others... I'm so complimented this one did that for you. thank you and welcome to David2, Tess and Terry W...very nice to have you here with us... Liz, coming from a poet of your caliber...I am truly humlbed...hopefully I am worthy(smile) SAME SAID AS ABOVE to-- Margie, Marina, Christie, Martie, Romantic Heart and HOOT thank YOU ladies... your too kind Danny...you have no idea how complimented I was by your words...again...THANK YOU! Sven...thank you for helping make me feel comfortable...expressing this "side of me" serentiy...HON dont break your puter!! how will you post your beautiful poems... LoneH...thank you for the very KIND words. James...ALL your words seduce us...you are superb. THANKS GUYS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOUR THE REASON PASSIONS IS HOME!!!!! Do you live by the book, do you play by the rules Do you care what is thought by others about you If this day is all that is promised to you Do you live for the present, the future the past... tracy chapman |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I see I'm late getting to the parade but let me add my sincere appreciation of this poem. It is truly excellent....a work to be proud of. |
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VampDude Junior Member
since 2000-03-24
Posts 21Canada |
Wow, truly and amazing poem, very intense.. I like it a lot, great work! "So close, no matter how far, couldn't be much more from the heart, forever trusting who we are, and nothing else matters" -Metallica- |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Um.... I was out with Balladeer... Is it too late to say this is a piece well done??... It was all his fault - I would've been here sooner.. I would've..  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Balladeer...hon, the parade cant start with out you...so your NEVER late...thank you so much for the kind words... Vampdude...THANK YOU and WELCOME!!!  we look forward to your work. Nan...you have a very good excuse...I can see how Balladeer could be a distraction ..thanks for the read and kind reply. THANK YOU...ALL of you... ALWAYS!!!!!!! take care , jm Do you live by the book, do you play by the rules Do you care what is thought by others about you If this day is all that is promised to you Do you live for the present, the future the past... tracy chapman |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
What I like about this poem is its duality. It could from you and about you, it could be about Passions, heck, or it could be both! Corinne |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Hope I'm not too late for the party SMILES! Janet, this was really great hon! I loved the rhyming scheme...different than most of your others. But it worked so well. I also loved the flow of it, and how each verse left u wanting more, and then u were so elequotently (sp) surprised by the next one! Congrats again my friend, u take my breath away!AMY ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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