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nightloy
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since 2000-03-19
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0 posted 2000-03-22 11:18 PM


There is nothing stronger than the power of love,
It controls over our thoughts and actions,
It is like a river nothing can stop it,
no matter how hard you try it keeps pushing you,
and pushing you and till it wears you out and you can help but give in to it. No matter how much you want to take control it overpowers your soul and commands you to obey. You fight as hard and as much as you can and no matter how many times you may win one, two, or three battles, you will never win the war. Submitting to the power of love is the only option.

                     ~nightloy




 

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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
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Hurricane Alley
1 posted 2000-03-22 11:39 PM


Welcome to Passions! Check your email for a special welcome. Just a quick note to let you know that posting a couple of poems when you first join us is great. But give us a chance to all respond before you post more..a couple a day is ok...thanks for understanding. We want to read your work and since we try so hard to read everything, if you post multiple poems at one time, it makes it harder for us.  
mete out
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 270
england
2 posted 2000-03-23 05:09 AM


***Nightloy,
There is alot of truth in this poem.

Love is such a powerful force, one of the strongest around.
Sometimes it is the best thing that has ever entered our lives, while in other situations it can possess such a deadly stranglehold ...

Great poem.      


 I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it.


PhaerieChild
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since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787
Aloha, Oregon
3 posted 2000-03-23 05:18 AM


Welcome to passions...this a great first post! Especially love that last line! Tis indeed the only option!

 Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream.

Shawna R. Holder
Boise, Idaho



A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
4 posted 2000-03-23 08:24 AM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!LOVE....ONE OF MY FAVORITE TOPICS!!!!LOVED IT!!!

 "Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove.
O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare


hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
5 posted 2000-03-23 10:23 AM


Welcome to passions  
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