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Untamed
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Untamed |
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shagirl Junior Member
since 2000-03-20
Posts 18southbeach, usa. |
Untamed In my dreams in fading light there comes a vision burning bright A beauty soft with lithe curve in moonlight dances, with passion serves His fleeting gaze of clear blue eyes framed in beauty and soulful sighs His wild spirit is shyly hidden a second beauty but kept within The yearning for him all day and night it conquers all things both wrong and right Inner battles are won and lost wars inspired at such a cost he drains your soul and brings you fire he saves your soul and brings you higher All things measured all things gained moonlit dancer heart untamed Stay the night for now and ever tame your heart a gentle tether Til winters bring our ending song stay with me and here belong shagirl.... [This message has been edited by shagirl (edited 03-21-2000).] |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
I think you've written a wonderful poem here! |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Shagirl, I love this poem, exspecialy the way you went both ways like, drains your soul brings you fire and saves your soul brings you higher, this is done very nicely. Welcome to passions, Cerenity |
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