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Nativetexan2
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since 2000-03-21
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0 posted 2000-03-22 06:28 PM


               LOST LOVE
                       By Rich

I woke up this morning to a dark and dreary day
I saw no sun, I heard no birds,
My world ended last night
amid the shouts of angry words.
Now I sit in my loneliness,
numb from the actions that I took.
I hold the pieces of my heart and
desperately seek the answers
The hurt is unbearable
I am blinded by emotion but
then to my surprise
I find the piece of my heart
where her memory resides
and I know she will be with me
forever more.



© Copyright 2000 Rich Martin - All Rights Reserved
wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)
1 posted 2000-03-22 06:31 PM


this is beeyootiful sentiment and yuh i know that dark and dreary stuff bein in fort worth myself!
David2
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since 2000-03-22
Posts 407

2 posted 2000-03-22 08:42 PM


Wow! That is a wonderful depiction of lost love. Beautiful.
      David2

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
3 posted 2000-03-22 08:50 PM


Welcome!!!I don't think she is lost, for she is ever inside your heart! beautiful poem!

 "Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove.
O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare


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