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Will I be?
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Will I be? |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion 
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Will I be? I wonder and ponder this constantly, will I be the stuff of his fantasies? Will he accept just plain old me, or will I meet a gaze of scrutiny? The calendar moves slow, then fast, countdown is finally here at last, even so the obstacles are vast, I just hope he won’t be aghast! We’ve put so much into this, till now, as time and distance would allow, but the true test is coming, and how! To his acumen I will bow. But it makes it easier, when I realize, there is something here to equalize, he must pass muster too, no lies, I have to think he’s a real prize! So here’s an idealistic idea for you, when we finally meet, here’s what to do, just kiss me quick, then tell me true, am I the one, and I’ll tell you, too! © 2000 C.M. Bailey |
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jascanvey Member
since 1999-12-26
Posts 130England |
Sweet poem Corinne, strange that I see it today - I have just met my on-line friend and this poem captures all my thoughts during the time we spent together! Excellent timing, thankyou! All of my life I've been searching for the words to say how I feel........ - Phil Collins. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
You stick with those convictions...and good luck. I liked the poem too. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This is nice Corrine..having a little bit of fear and doubt are you? To me it would depend on your expectations..are you looking for a friend that may become a lover....or are you looking for your soulmate to appear before you..and also what is he looking for. The important part is that both of you are willing to take the time and effort to meet and get to know one another. What happens after that is beyond both of your control. Good luck to both of you. James |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Corinne...lovely words. I think we all think these things when we are meeting someone special for the first time. You captured it perfectly. Good luck!!! Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
This was very well put to words Corinne. There is nothing worse then the anticipation of meeting someone and thinking is this the"ONE". I guess there is nothing to do but sit back and see if feelings grow. Marina |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Dear Jas - thank you! Glad this evoked sweet memories for you! Thank you, Martie! James, thank you, and what can I say, but hey, we've either found our soul mate or we're looking for one, right? Thank you also, Lone Wolf and Marina, anticipation was the mood I was hoping for in this poem, but with a light approach. Corinne |
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Rosalind Palafox
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MemberPosts 88 |
This is a sweet poem, enjoyed it!Why don't they all accept us for who we are? "Love knows hidden paths."-German proverb |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
This is superb.. Isn't it wonderful to get to know someone special from the "Inside Out"?.... to know your minds are in sync.. to hope that final piece of the puzzle fits??.. To allow whatever will be - to happen in its own time is perhaps the key... then nothing will ever be lost...  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Corinne~ Apprehension lightly put at bay. With your sense of humor and beautiful talent ... he'll adore you. I think perhaps he must already, eh? I like your approach.  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you, Rosalind, Nan and Marge. And Marge? Things are not always the way they seem! Corinne |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Corinne, I'm sure if he's seen that cute little pic, and reads your wonderful verse, he's sure to fall fall fall, but you still hold the final card. Hey thats a great idea for your first meeting..... gum?  Parker [This message has been edited by Haleyja (edited 03-24-2000).] |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Corinne...how can he do anything but love you Good luck dear |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thanks, Parker and Hoot! Corinne Gum? |
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RAM Member
since 2000-03-24
Posts 153 |
A great blend of humor/anticipation/anxiety, Corinne. And, yes, "gum"? (grinning) RAM |
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