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This Dream
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This Dream |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California 
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THIS DREAM I sit and cry a silent tear, Longing for you to hold me near. I wish I could just fly to you, To somehow make this dream come true. Your voice whispers soft in my ears, As all the world disappears. I dance with you ‘neath the night sky, You wipe the tear from my eye. I wish that I could find a way, To pull you near if just to say... These words that linger on my lips, Feel passion with these fingertips, By a glazed stare upon my eye, Within your kiss, one breathless sigh, In my grasp what I hold now true... The dream in heart I share with you. Michael [This message has been edited by Michael (edited 03-22-2000).] |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
sigh...lovely poem and great optimism |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
I'll be near enough to touch before you know it....patience my dearest... Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
feels like eavesdropping...intimate and sweet. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Michael you have turned out to be a romantic lately...must be the muse you have for inspiration!  Lovely words! lucky lady!!!"Love is not love Which alters when it alteration finds, Or bends with the remover to remove. O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
You really revealed your romantic part in this one...I love the lines.."These words that linger on my lips, Feel passion with these fingertips." James |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Michael~ Love comes in to warm the heart. So nice to see your 'fire'.  ~*Marge~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Beautiful and romantic, well done Michael! What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Michael, there seem to be many facets to you. A complex man, yes? This is especially soft and sensuous. Corinne |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Romance is a wonderful thing |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful poem, Michael! Denise |
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Talaira Junior Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 10Colorado |
Beautiful! |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Michael....beautifully written. Hope you get your chance. Never lose sight of the dreeam. Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
hey walt, good to hear from you bud - it's been awhile. Me thinks "we" should collaborate on a poem of our own since you've been venturing into that realm lately. LMK what you think. devina - **twiddling thumbs**  serenity - you're welcome to listen in anytime. A Romantic Heart, the right muse makes all the differance in the world me thinks. james, yeah that part of me is there - just been dormant for awhile. Marge, Indeed, it feels good to shake off some of that frost.... Corinne, complex would be a mild understatement me thinks... Lone Wolf, that I never will. Thank you all for the kind replies. Michael |
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Tess Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 288Australia |
words so soft and tender........a beautiful poem creating lovely images....and inspired no doubt by an equally wonderful person...thanks for sharing it I loved reading it Tess |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Michael, Another romantic deep feeling poem, something must be in the water. I've missed much not reading all the poems. This one is a gem. |
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CherylLynnMckee Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 215 |
Wow..one word..beautiful |
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hsystems Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 319Murray, UT, USA |
Michael, what a magnificent gift of expression you have - and what a loving heart. You have a lucky lady, there! Troy  Beautiful, Thought-Provoking Poetry http://www.h-systems.net/p1.htm |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Longings expressed beautifully! *S* |
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