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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I’ve held my piece long enough No pun intended here Someone has caught my fancy It’s one of you, I fear. No words have I yet spoken Pledging to you my heart No verses yet are written I knew not where to start But as the time of spring Draws longer into the day My passion for you grows And I just have to say Deep within my heart Your tender smiles reside And now that I am bolder No longer can I hide I ask not for your love In reply to my little rhyme But if you could, please, Take a bit of time Think hard upon my plight Give pause at end of day “I love you too” is all I wish to hear you say Only one reply I seek But I know it will not be For of this love you are immune And cannot, sir, love me. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
can't reply hmm well oops...whoever tiz is very lucky yuh...well written poet good luck to you |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Sorry Sharon...couln't help but reply to such a beautiful poem...good luck girl!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Gotta reply anyway. I hope you get the response you desire with such a fine poem as this. And if it makes any difference...I love ya too  |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Alright so shoot me, but I had to bump it back up  |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
I'm not replying, i'm hopeing, that this person will get the message and respond to this lady's fancy. Back up you go................ ps, nice poem. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Well, it's easy to see you aren't talking about me because, after so many months of seeing your heart, feelings and beautiful emotions permeate your poetry, I find it easy to say I love you. Who's da bum that wouldn't?  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
You better tell him, else how's he to tell you? Hope it works out just the way you want it, too. [This message has been edited by Martie (edited 03-22-2000).] |
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Broken Wings Member
since 2000-03-18
Posts 157Miami, FL. |
Oh My Gawd, how BEAUTIFUL! GOOD LUCK!! take care, Broken Wings "As you learn and grow, you will realize the greater the pain, the greater the growth." -IYANLA VANZANT |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Unrequited Love...such Muse... A wonderful treatise of desire goddess!! |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Well I can certainly relate to your situation PdV. Sometimes you want to hear absolutely nothing but those 3 little words... for nothing else matters. I hope they find there way to you. Michael |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Sharon this is beautiful, hope this poem gives you the response you need. Good Luck! What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
I love your approach, Poet de Vine! And if he had any inkling, he'll definitely know now! Best of luck to you both, too! Corinne |
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Craig Member
since 1999-06-10
Posts 444 |
Just in case he doesn’t show and to prove once and for all that I can’t write....... I could climb the highest mountainside Stand on the shore and turn the tide Leap clear twelve feet up off the floor I could keep the world from warring Stop Brazilian soccer strikers scoring I could do it and it wouldn’t be a chore But I’m sorry I can’t love you any more I could easily swim the widest sea Set all the oppressed nations free See all that mankind is and has in store I could brave the very fires of hell Fight rabid bears and live to tell Give you almost anything you ask me for But I’m sorry I can’t love you any more I could bring you wine or serenade You with the silly rhymes I’ve made From evenings fall until the morning dew I could snatch the moon out of the sky Grow angels wings and learn to fly Do all these things because you asked me to But I can't love you more than I already do Yes, I admit your general rule. That every poet is a fool: But I myself may serve to show it. That every fool is not a poet. |
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Tess Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 288Australia |
I like it Very whimsical...light...and full of humour..yet just that touch of longing.. Good luck!! Tess |
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ken Junior Member
since 2000-03-10
Posts 49RI |
Love will fing a way. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
If this man can't love you, PdV, I know there's someone out there who can.. Your heart is so kind and giving, it's got to be there for you..  |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Love is out there, Ms. deVine. And if it's destined, he will love you. And if it isn't, someone else surely will. You are a wonderful person and who couldn't love you? Beautiful work, deserves another bump up.  *Krista Knutson* ~*Only when trudging through the soul's darkest midnight can one truly appreciate the glory of the sunrise*~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Sharon, how could we not reply? This one has to stay on the first page so that the love of Sharon's life can see it and reply. . . and if you're reading this, you lucky man. . . don't keep this poor woman in suspense. . . reply! Okay, you don't have to reply here, you can send her an e-mail, but do it soon!!! Oh, and Sharon, this was a beautiful poem. . . I hope that he does reply, becasue how could any man not love someone as wonderful as you? --------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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David2 Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 407 |
Good luck! David2 |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Well , I never could follow directions either , so I just gotta say , best of luck to you and your intended paramour ( but he probably doesn't deserve it ) Doc |
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nightloy New Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 8 |
Ain't it the truth. It hurts to know how much you like someone and them not liking you. Everyone goes through it but why must we put ourselves through hell. anyway, love the poem (had to reply) ~nightloy |
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Chandni New Member
since 2000-03-14
Posts 4Bangalore, India |
Best of luck Miss DeV Chandni |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
This is so sad ... I wish you luck in finding true happiness Rex}<{{{{o> |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Well Strangle me*S* Lovely poem....time will reveal all truths..be patient... |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
I LOVE you Sharon. You have one of the most beautiful, caring, gifted hearts I've ever been blessed to know. I know that there are many men out there who only wish they could pierce that shell around your heart. I know I for one, love you. And even though you can't have me, even though you hound me with love letters all the time, even though you write beautiful poetry for me, I still only want to be friends! ok?? Luv ya girl! |
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