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Forgiving The Self
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Forgiving The Self |
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christies heart Member
since 1999-08-10
Posts 189NJ, USA |
Looking, forever wistfully, through a < !signature-->kolidiscope that ends with the river's twirlling light, intersecting with nature. Wanting, in some small way, to know there is a reason for the wind, but feeling a stronger pull towards the nebulus one that awaits, and knows me well. Knowing that Somewhere in between these places there are children who need and a self unsure, I live and hope that meaning will come with waves of self forgiveness for what I have not yet done.... Grant that I may not judge my niegbor until I have walked a mile in his moccasians Native American prayer [This message has been edited by christies heart (edited 03-21-2000).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Knowing that Somewhere in between these places there are children who need and a self unsure, I live and hope that meaning will come with waves of self forgiveness for what I have not yet done... ------ timing is everything(smile) i get to read this first!! I love this poem, it reads so calmly and has a beautiful peaceful feeling about it... as always, i relate to your words...I know all too well these feelings of regret and the need to be free of guilt put on us by others...or atleast that is what my heart read into this one. perfect as always. jm and you can say baby... baby can I hold you tonight maybe if told you the right words... at the right time, you'd be mine... baby can I hold you tonight... tracy chapman |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
I like this one Christie and I have to ditto Janet with the comments. Very gentle indeed. Marina |
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