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Alwye
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In the space between moments

0 posted 2000-03-19 11:23 PM


When night pierces like the raven's eye,
I'll be the light embracing you.
When you weary heart wants only to die,
I'll be the hope to guide you through.

When fragile tears burst through your soul,
You can cry within my arms.
When you fear life and wish to sink below,
Let me keep you safe from harm.

When your long lost dreams are found,
I'll be there to share your desire.
And when your wings cannot leave the ground,
Our hearts will combine to create the fire.

When the world seems cold and out of touch,
With my love, warmth I will bring.
And when it seems that nothing matters much,
I will strive to be your everything.

~Jeff, thank you for being my everything~



 *Krista Knutson*

~*Only when trudging through the soul's darkest midnight can one truly appreciate the glory of the sunrise*~



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Dusk Treader
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1 posted 2000-03-19 11:36 PM


Beautiful poem Krista.  Such wonderful sentiment you have in there.  I'm really happy for you two.  It's a great sight to see people so closely bonded.

 Abrahm Simons

Put one foot on the path of life and tread the dagger's path betwixt dark and light.


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2 posted 2000-03-20 02:32 AM


Alwye~
Hope flies on feathered wing.
Glad to see your spirit soaring.
Lovely.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Nan
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3 posted 2000-03-20 07:47 AM


Jeff's a lucky guy, Alwye.. nice work here..
Dark Angel
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4 posted 2000-03-20 04:17 PM


This is beautiful Alwye, so very beautiful.  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



Janet Marie
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5 posted 2000-03-20 08:26 PM


this is such a beautiful love filled poem, you expresses your devotion with grace. very nice, take care, jm

 and you can say baby...
baby can I hold you tonight
maybe if told you the right words...
at the right time,
you'd be mine...
baby can I hold you tonight...
tracy chapman



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