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Where Are You Now?
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Where Are You Now? |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Where Are You Now? A falling star called to me tonight A compelling wish I had to make To know you were safe and sound And thinking only of me Did you see the same shooting star And wish a similar wish Did you ask if I was thinking, only of you And If I was happy and well Is love in the stars Or in fate or maybe destiny Dreams perhaps is where it lives Our hearts the perfect playground I wait for you in daydreams My heart calls to the next star Always asking them a burning question Where are you now? Marina Mar 2000 [This message has been edited by Marina (edited 03-19-2000).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful, Marina! Very lovely! Denise |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
I see that your poetry is changing to romantic wanting. Ok now join the rest of the crew on passions boat.... Its very good. Parker |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Lovely, Marina! Corinne |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Marina... It's really a little amazing to see this side of you. . . I guess I've always thought that it was there, and now that I see it here. . . I like it. . . This was a very romantic poem. . . I enjoyed every word of it. . . reminds me of the song of the same name. . . Beautiful Marina. . .but then again, I am never disappointed by you. . . --------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
"I wait for you in daydreams" ...this is so lovely! all of it... ~ Claire |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Denise, thank you James,thank you but romance realy isn't my thing and this poem was orginally inspired through something else. Corinne,thanks Sven, your so sweet to me. Thank you for your compliments, and yes sometimes I can actaully be human. Claire thank you very much Marina |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
no smart remarks from you Sven!!! I know there coming! Marina |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Marina, why do you expect them? I know that you can be human. . . what else could you be? Well, the only thing that makes it hard for someone to believe that you're human could be these wires. . . ----------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Sven, please do forgive me...of course YOU wouln't say anything smart! Marina |
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Windrider Silverbreeze Junior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 33 |
*chuckle* Well as much as I would like to reply to the bantering back and forth I would merely like to say I thought your poem was lovely. Keep up the wonderful work. It is a pleasure to read your works. |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Windreider,thank you very much for reading and your compliment. Oh, and the other stuff you'll get use to around here! Marina |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Marina...this is very nice  |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Ruth, thank you very much |
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