Open Poetry #6 |
Shift Change |
nona Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 139Fla |
A quietness settles on the earth just before the dawn As the dew settles on the lawn. Mother Nature washing the faces of her children preparing them for the day. She protects them with her cloak of darkness from the creatures of the night. And as the new day dawns they come out to reclaim their place and to reign supreme unitl once again the dusk does fall. Allowing the creatures of the night to awaken and to ply their trades once more. Each in their own time sharing the same space but never meeting. nona |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I'd never thought of it quite like that before! This is great Nona! Denise |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I think I'll wait up and watch the shift change tonight....good poem. |
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nona Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 139Fla |
Being a night worker for years I always thought about the change of shifts. Thanks for your encouragement to this new writer. Never thought I could say what I felt very well thanks again |
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christies heart Member
since 1999-08-10
Posts 189NJ, USA |
As a fellow night worker for years, I love the way you put this feeling into poetry...Chris Grant that I may not judge my niegbor until I have walked a mile in his moccasians Native American prayer |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Oh, this is very beautiful |
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