Open Poetry #6 |
A Silenced Little Ditty |
Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
A Silenced Little Ditty Born again illusion coiled up and set in rhyme a silenced little ditty set free to do it's time. Among the hoards of millions all gathering dust in time a silenced little ditty coiled up and free to rhyme. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
A little ditty, oh perhaps But one you've written well Its rhythm is enchanting And from it notes just swell How can your poetry gather dust When it's safely tucked away Inside this very heart and mind Where it will always stay |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Delightful ditty Lost Dreamer ... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is great Gloria! Delightful! Yours too Ruth! Denise |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
But it isn't silenced!!! |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
"Born again illusion" is a WONDERFUL description of a poem! Very good, Gloria! |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Ruth: Thank You so much for your poetic kind reply Pepper: Thank You so very much for your reply Denise: My thanks to you for always reading and responding so kindly. Sharon: Thank You for responding and you are right I don't think it can ever be silenced unless one choses to ignore all sense of it. Balladeer: Thank You for your kind reply, glad you liked it. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This one shouldn't be gathering dust! Denise |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
tee hee i like this its insightful |
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