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Lost Dreamer
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Somewhere near the Rainbow

0 posted 2000-03-19 08:44 AM


A Silenced Little Ditty

Born again illusion
coiled up
and set in rhyme
a silenced little ditty
set free
to do it's time.

Among the hoards
of millions
all gathering dust in time
a silenced little ditty
coiled up
and free to rhyme.

© Copyright 2000 RiaL - All Rights Reserved
hoot_owl_rn
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1 posted 2000-03-19 09:59 AM


A little ditty, oh perhaps
But one you've written well
Its rhythm is enchanting
And from it notes just swell
How can your poetry gather dust
When it's safely tucked away
Inside this very heart and mind
Where it will always stay



Pepper
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2 posted 2000-03-19 11:11 AM


Delightful ditty Lost Dreamer ...
Denise
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3 posted 2000-03-19 02:07 PM


This is great Gloria! Delightful!  

Yours too Ruth!  

Denise

Poet deVine
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4 posted 2000-03-19 04:06 PM


But it isn't silenced!!!  
Balladeer
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5 posted 2000-03-19 06:52 PM


"Born again illusion" is a WONDERFUL description of a poem! Very good, Gloria!
Lost Dreamer
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6 posted 2000-03-19 10:29 PM


Ruth: Thank You so much for your poetic kind reply

Pepper: Thank You so very much for your reply

Denise: My thanks to you for always reading and responding so kindly.

Sharon: Thank You for responding and you are right I don't think it can ever be silenced unless one choses to ignore all sense of it.

Balladeer: Thank You for your kind reply, glad you liked it.

Denise
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7 posted 2000-03-21 10:15 AM


This one shouldn't be gathering dust!  

Denise

wayoutwalt
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8 posted 2000-03-21 10:16 AM


tee hee i like this its insightful
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