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The Breath of passion
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The Breath of passion |
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Loneheart Member
since 1999-09-13
Posts 92Eastern US |
The Breath of Passion As visions of thee engulf my mind I can almost feel thy silken softness caressing my soul. Your soft enticing sighs still linger on within the lonely corridors of my mind as I intreat the thoughts of thy gentle fingers fragilely playing a melody of lustful tunes upon my soul. Thy fragile beauty doth seduce me. I hear a soft breeze whispering thy name as it quickens my every breath and excites my soul. Liken unto a mythical Goddess is thy beauty. Oh Princess slender and chaste, sensuous are thee. Pleasure mine eyes with thy beauty once more, that I might bask in thy delectible passion that consumes this Knight's very soul. The soft sweetness of thy voice stirs emotion within mine heart that only ye shall quench. My heart and my soul I give unto thee freely my love. So harken unto this plea fair maid draw not thy curtains so quickly Lest loves light be darkened and wisp away unto a land of faraway dreams, where love is of naught? Let he who has wisdom hear these words... If serenity and passion is thy life's quest then patience shall be thy path. [This message has been edited by Loneheart (edited 03-18-2000).] |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
I am breathless...everytime I read your poetry my chest hurts... The curtains are open inside this fair maids heart!  Ps...I hope you don't mind but I have your website as a link on my homepage.http://Sitebuilder.liveuniverse.com/dearrose< !signature--> "Love is not love Which alters when it alteration finds, Or bends with the remover to remove. O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (edited 03-18-2000).] |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
This is truly a gorgeous piece Loneheart .... I hope you find your "fair maid" soon .... what a lucky lady she will be ..... I enjoyed this piece so .... Shannon [This message has been edited by Pepper (edited 03-18-2000).] |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Very nice... I particularly like your final stanza.. Patience certainly is the path to serenity..  |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I enjoyed this..but sometimes I have no patience..I want it NOW! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Breathtaking! This is so passionate and beautifully romantic! Denise |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
My fingers are playing lustful tunes upon thy soul, as I patiently wait my knight to appear. WOW, you have got my heart, dear knight, with this lovely poem. What a wonderful romantic piece. Bravo! Liz |
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