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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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What have i wished upon myself? What things my pen has set in motion? Who told my heart to beat again? My fingers, masturbate emotion? Who set the rhythm of this drum? Who timed the Revelation? Who made me feel what I would not-- to spite sensational sensation? Who was it whispered me 'aware'? Whose eyes on neck, did I feel stare? What have I yearned for all along? Who is the Silence Of My Song? like books that yearn to be on shelves, we all wish to complete ourselves... |
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John Yaws Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 860Texas |
Aye, lassie. Complete ourselves indeed. An' Faith! I'd say ye've done it well wi' this one. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ This is simply wonderful. 'Who was it whispered me 'aware'?' Someone must have .. and now you seem wide awake! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wonderful Serenity! Great writing! Denise |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Tell it like it is sis...this was great...you've got some damn good lines in this one!!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
THANX TO: "Gunslinger", with utmost respect, sir... thank you, again...enjoyed the the "blarney"! thanx again. "Marge/Mom", (Mom's #1!) serenity smiles... Denise------ i don't know how to begin to thank you... devina! extra-special thanks, my internet 'sis', am sending extra-special blessings your way! (Smile, Miss Lovely!) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
wow this poem is WAY COOL!!!!! i loved the way it read and yes, you have some AWESOME lines in this... perfect title... jm Now for me some words come easy But I know that they don't mean that much Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch You never knew what I loved in you I don't know what you loved in me Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be jackson browne |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Serenity--very strong and excellent poem...and I echo the wonderful lines!! Bravo! |
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Joannak Member
since 2000-03-11
Posts 121Indiana, USA |
Serenity, What a wonderful piece of work, it made me think about that person in my own life that makes me complete... joanna |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Wow...the last 2 lines did it for me! Talk about wrapping it up with a powerful bow!  I can say I have felt like an unfinished book myself of late! LOL This really put it all into perspective for me!! Wonderful read, with some colorful words! HOT |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Serenity, I stand in awe. INclan |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
JM --ya got me thinkin' with your "passions heat" Thanks, luvie! Martie--high praise from the master... serenity bows humbly... Joanna--thank you. I missed your entrance into the forum. I'll be looking for your work in the future. pFF--you had a hand in this also...really enjoyed your last post! glad to see you stuck around. Thanks! Inclan--I am in awe of your awe, and also your apparent ability to type while standing! Thanks to all! |
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