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Hold Me Like Tomorrow Matters
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Hold Me Like Tomorrow Matters |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Hold Me Like Tomorrow Matters ~*Marge Tindal*~ When shadows of the night awaken you come waltzing through the door Hold me like tomorrow matters dance with me forevermore Through the years I will remember love that always held me tight Hold me like tomorrow matters do not leave me in the night Forever holding and enfolding thoughts of you within my heart Hold me like tomorrow matters from this love I will not depart I always will remember evenings locked in your embrace Hold me like tomorrow matters your love reflected on my face ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful Marge! You seem to be able to master any form of poetry! Such a talent you have! Denise |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Ohh... How I love your poetry Marge! ~ This was simply beautiful~ Marie~ "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind; And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
I have to agree with Denise here Marge. Such wonderful form and beautifully expressed. Marina |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise~ I value your opinion on what I write. I don't know about 'master' ... but I sure do enjoy writing. Mariee~ Thank you sooooooo much. I'm pleased that it gives you such joy. Marina~ Gosh, I appreciate it so much. My heart just says write it ... so I do. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh marge this is soooo beautiful, beautifully written!  What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
I'm glad you listened to heart on this one Marge...the title ays so much!!! Keep that pen flowing m'dear...this was too good!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DarkAngel~ This one just jumped from the trees on my morning break at work. It hung around until I got home to pen it. So glad you enjoyed. Devina~ Honey, you are such an 'upper'. Thank you always for being such a positive reader. I'll do my best to keep those muses happy. But .... goodness they sure keep me busy ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Oh my! This is so deep and lovely Marge! (I swear, mom. i didn't see a thing...) But truly, you have moved me. Lovely, lovely, love... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Little Serenity~ I so appreciate your replies. I can just hear the enthusiasm. You're a sweetie and I thank you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Marge Only this from one so devine Just dreamy Tracie Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tracie~ How sweet your replies. Thank you from the heart of my little bottom. ~*Marge*~< !signature--> ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 03-18-2000).] |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
This is beautiful. You are in an elite class all your own Marge. This was so.....in the moment. I loved it!! **butterfly kisses and angel wing hugs** |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"I always will remember evenings locked in your embrace." Now these are the kind of memories I desire to remember. Lovely writing and lovely memories. James |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ButterfliesDC~ Oh .. what a very nice thing for you to say. Mega thanks. James~ With your romantic heart and kindness ... I'm sure you will have these moments to remember, love. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Ravenlearns2fly Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 71 |
Marge as always your words leave me with such a warm feeling. My tomorrow matters now more than ever, thank you for being the spirit that guides my heart. Raven |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Raven~ When spirits touch, their sole purpose is to guide another soul where they need be. Ours met so that each could guide the other. You lend me yours ... I lend you mine together we walk in harmony. Thank you for your warm comments. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Sweetest Marge, You did it again ... I'm sitting here in a puddle of melt ... This sings to me .... Beautiful ... so beautiful .... L, Shannon |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Lovely, Marge! Corinne |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Marge: So much I could say...Big HUSG |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Hold me like tommorow matters, Swept me off my feet And then came the repeat. Wonderful poem. *L* Sy |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Marge the title just rang! The poem was wonderful too! I think you have inspired me to write something on this thanks |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
It does matter, very sweetly written. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Pepper~ Oh, I'm so glad you enjoyed. Corinne~ Thanks, gal. RainbowGirl~ Just knowing you liked is enough. Seymour~ Pleasing you - pleases me. WhiteDove~ Anxiously awaiting. The title sang out to me too. Gemini~ Thank you. Yes, it does, indeed. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Do poems like this jump out on just anyone who wanders under those trees? *G* Could you point me towards that forest??? Please!!! This is beautiful, Marge. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Suthern~ LOL ! I'm as mystified as you ... but every work day ... I do take my break under the shade of an aged tree ... it has never failed to whisper to me yet. It is a fir tree and must be 50+ years old. It holds the mysteries of the muse. So glad you like this. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
How we spend today does indeed affect our tomorrows... Nice muse you've got there... A tree, you say??  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Nan~ That's a nice phrase. And yes, a tree .... or perhaps it could be the birds that nest in that tree. They are mourning doves. But they are not always there and the tree is ... so it MUST be the tree. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Marge I've been watching this title go up and down the page, but was saving it for desert. But I just coudn't take it anymore. It was every bit as wonderful as I thought it would be. Your romantic juices never stop flowing from your pen, and lucky for us. Beautiful, my dear Liz |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
SMiling here....Marge, it doesn't get much better than this Wonderful poem. The rhythm is supurb |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, Lizzie~ So glad it was irrestible. Thank you for thinking so. Guess you're right ... the romantic in me loves it when the lines just flow freely, as this one did. Hoot~ So pleased when the gracious muses lay one like this at my feet. Thank you for the comment on the rhythm. Love you ... ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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