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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2000-03-18 12:31 PM


Hold Me Like Tomorrow Matters
~*Marge Tindal*~

When shadows of the night awaken
you come waltzing through the door
Hold me like tomorrow matters
dance with me forevermore

Through the years I will remember
love that always held me tight
Hold me like tomorrow matters
do not leave me in the night

Forever holding and enfolding
thoughts of you within my heart
Hold me like tomorrow matters
from this love I will not depart

I always will remember
evenings locked in your embrace
Hold me like tomorrow matters
your love reflected on my face





 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Denise
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1 posted 2000-03-18 12:37 PM


This is beautiful Marge! You seem to be able to master any form of poetry! Such a talent you have!

Denise

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2 posted 2000-03-18 12:41 PM


Ohh... How I love your poetry Marge! ~
This was simply beautiful~
Marie~


 "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind;
And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard


Marina
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3 posted 2000-03-18 12:42 PM


I have to agree with Denise here Marge.  Such wonderful form and beautifully expressed.

Marina

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4 posted 2000-03-18 01:01 AM


Denise~
I value your opinion on what I write.
I don't know about 'master' ...
but I sure do enjoy writing.

Mariee~
Thank you sooooooo much.
I'm pleased that it gives you such joy.

Marina~
Gosh, I appreciate it so much.
My heart just says write it ... so I do.
~*Marge*~





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Dark Angel
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5 posted 2000-03-18 01:55 AM


Oh marge this is soooo beautiful, beautifully written!  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



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6 posted 2000-03-18 01:57 AM


I'm glad you listened to heart on this one Marge...the title ays so much!!! Keep that pen flowing m'dear...this was too good!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...


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7 posted 2000-03-18 02:03 AM


DarkAngel~
This one just jumped from the
trees on my morning break at work.
It hung around until I got home
to pen it.  So glad you enjoyed.

Devina~
Honey, you are such an 'upper'.
Thank you always for being such
a positive reader.
I'll do my best to keep those
muses happy.  But .... goodness
they sure keep me busy !
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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8 posted 2000-03-18 02:04 AM


Oh my!  This is so deep and lovely Marge!
(I swear, mom. i didn't see a thing...)

But truly, you have moved me.  Lovely, lovely, love...

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9 posted 2000-03-18 02:32 AM


Little Serenity~
I so appreciate your replies.
I can just hear the enthusiasm.
You're a sweetie and I thank you.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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tracie66
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10 posted 2000-03-18 03:22 AM


Marge
Only this from one so devine
Just dreamy
Tracie


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Anne Rooks

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11 posted 2000-03-18 03:39 AM


Tracie~
How sweet your replies.
Thank you from the heart of
my little bottom.  
~*Marge*~
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 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com           



[This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 03-18-2000).]

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12 posted 2000-03-18 07:33 AM


This is beautiful.  You are in an elite class all your own Marge.  This was so.....in the moment.  I loved it!!
**butterfly kisses and angel wing hugs**

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13 posted 2000-03-18 08:30 AM


"I always will remember evenings locked in your embrace."  Now these are the kind of memories I desire to remember.  Lovely writing and lovely memories.   James
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14 posted 2000-03-18 02:23 PM


ButterfliesDC~
Oh .. what a very nice thing for you to say.
Mega thanks.

James~
With your romantic heart and kindness ...
I'm sure you will have these moments to remember, love.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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15 posted 2000-03-18 03:38 PM


Marge
as always your words leave me with such a warm feeling. My tomorrow matters now more than ever, thank you for being the spirit that guides my heart.
Raven

 

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16 posted 2000-03-19 10:07 AM


Raven~
When spirits touch, their sole purpose
is to guide another soul where they need be.
Ours met so that each could guide the other.
You lend me yours ... I lend you mine
together we walk in harmony.
Thank you for your warm comments.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Pepper
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17 posted 2000-03-19 11:09 AM


Sweetest Marge,
You did it again ... I'm sitting here in a puddle of melt ...  
This sings to me ....
Beautiful ... so beautiful ....
L,
Shannon

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18 posted 2000-03-19 11:19 AM


Lovely, Marge!

Corinne

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19 posted 2000-03-19 11:22 AM


Marge: So much I could say...Big HUSG
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20 posted 2000-03-19 11:36 AM


Marge,
Hold me like tommorow matters,
Swept me off my feet
And then came the repeat.
Wonderful poem. *L* Sy

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21 posted 2000-03-19 11:38 AM


Marge the title just rang! The poem was wonderful too!  I think you have inspired me to write something on this   thanks
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22 posted 2000-03-19 12:47 PM


It does matter, very sweetly written.
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23 posted 2000-03-19 01:16 PM


Pepper~
Oh, I'm so glad you enjoyed.

Corinne~
Thanks, gal.

RainbowGirl~
Just knowing you liked is enough.

Seymour~
Pleasing you - pleases me.

WhiteDove~
Anxiously awaiting.
The title sang out to me too.

Gemini~
Thank you.  Yes, it does, indeed.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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24 posted 2000-03-19 05:26 PM


Do poems like this jump out on just anyone who wanders under those trees? *G* Could you point me towards that forest??? Please!!! This is beautiful, Marge.
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25 posted 2000-03-19 07:22 PM


Suthern~
LOL !  I'm as mystified as you ... but every work day ... I do take my break under the shade of an aged tree ... it has never failed to whisper to me yet.
It is a fir tree and must be 50+ years old.  
It holds the mysteries of the muse.
So glad you like this.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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26 posted 2000-03-19 07:45 PM


How we spend today does indeed affect our tomorrows... Nice muse you've got there... A tree, you say??
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27 posted 2000-03-19 07:59 PM


Nan~
That's a nice phrase.
And yes, a tree .... or perhaps
it could be the birds that nest
in that tree.  
They are mourning doves.
But they are not always there
and the tree is ... so it MUST be the tree.
~*Marge*~



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Elizabeth Santos
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28 posted 2000-03-19 08:05 PM


Marge
I've been watching this title go up and down the page, but was saving it for desert. But I just coudn't take it anymore. It was every bit as wonderful as I thought it would be. Your romantic juices never stop flowing from your pen, and lucky for us.
Beautiful, my dear
Liz

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29 posted 2000-03-19 08:21 PM


SMiling here....Marge, it doesn't get much better than this   Wonderful poem. The rhythm is supurb  
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30 posted 2000-03-19 08:38 PM


Oh, Lizzie~
So glad it was irrestible.
Thank you for thinking so.
Guess you're right ...
the romantic in me loves it when
the lines just flow freely, as this
one did.

Hoot~
So pleased when the gracious muses
lay one like this at my feet.
Thank you for the comment on the rhythm.
Love you ...
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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