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Just A Whisper Away
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Just A Whisper Away |
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Ravenlearns2fly Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 71 |
A whisper Away To You My Love To you my love I come by flight I fly in shadows through-out the night Fear not my love of the dark around For I am near , my love surrounds I am within the whispers as you venture out With in the wind so gently I fly about I am within the trees, they will keep you safe My arms the branches, whom to you embrace I am within the rain as it falls from sky above Each drop a heat beat of my eternal love I am within the moonlight that off in distance lies Forever watching as you close your eyes I am within the sun that warms you with my light To greet in morning, at dusk to kiss goodnight I am within your dreams, in case you fear To destroy the monsters if they draw near To you my love, I come by flight All around you I am, yet hidden from sight I am forever close, you need think of me only I am bound by your heart, so you need never be lonely By (c) Raven Legros |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Oh what a breath of lovely! Well done Raven, well done. I am within the rain as it falls from sky above Each drop a heat beat of my eternal love Love that line! 'Writing sharpens life; life enriches writing' Sylvia Plath |
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Ravenlearns2fly Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 71 |
Severn Well now! thank you very much. I wrote this 2 years ago when I fell in love (I was such a fool) but 1 thing good came out of it ok maybe there were a few good things. ha ha but this man said to me that words ment nothing so I tried to find away to express my self using words yet providing symbols he could identify with. it worked and I became a better poet in the process. now if I could just get this love thing to work ha ha!!!! smile Raven |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
You have a beautiful way with words, Raven! This is very lovely! Denise |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Raven, my friend~ This is simply lovely. Guess something good came out of the relationship ... and this is proof of that. Keep smiling !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Raven - these words are beautiful - they were music to my ears - thank you for sharing them with us .......  Roniece |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
A wonderfully well expressed poem. Welcome to Passions! Marina |
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Ravenlearns2fly Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 71 |
To denise, Marge, Roniece, and Marina- thank you all for your kind words.Warms my heart that you all liked this poem. Raven |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Raven, this truly a beautiful poem...its lovely and graceful to read...very well written with your sentiments and emotions. take care, jm Now for me some words come easy But I know that they don't mean that much Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch You never knew what I loved in you I don't know what you loved in me Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be jackson browne |
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Ravenlearns2fly Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 71 |
JM thank you for your very nice words, i am so glad you and the others liked this poem raven |
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