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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
The wind calls your name The birds sing your song I'll never be the same Now that you've gone The taste of your lips The warmth of your touch Back to those moments I slip longing for them so much The sound of your voice Still rings in my ears You made me rejoice You dried all my tears You taught me to love You showed me the way A gift from above I'll treasure each day Good night sweet one With your memory I sleep our time together is done You were never mine to keep Butterflies don't cry Are they more blessed than I? |
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Shelley Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 263Ohio, USA |
What beautiful memories you have. This is very lovely. ~you taught me to love you showed my the way~ I find that a very courageous thing to admit Beautiful! |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Butterflies-dont-cry, This poem was great, I have ringing in my ears for the past I can totally relate. Thank you, Cerenity |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Hi Butterflies_Dont_Cry, I shall restrain my comments this time. I don't want you changing colour again...lol. This is really good though, I like it very much, I think we could all relate to the longing for memories such as these. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sounds like a lovely romance..sorry it didn't work out..James |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ButterfliesDC~ How sweetly this flows from your heart. You are getting better and better at letting go of the feelings ... and that is a good thing. They fall upon the page with beauty. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
I can certainly relate to this one. You have express this feeling perfectly. Marina |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Shelley, Memories are one thing...good or bad...that no one can take from you. Thank you  Cerenity, Thank you for reading EagleOne, My complexion thanks you...lol Thank you for reading and thank you for your kind words. James, Actually this one did work out...it was just time to let it go. Endings are beginnings if you look hard enough and learn from it Thank you for your comments and for reading.Marge, You as always are much to kind, and that makes you who you are Thank you so much for everything, you are the best!!!Marina, Thank you so much. Butterflies don't cry Are they more blessed than I? |
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