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Being Home |
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Stacieness New Member
since 2000-03-16
Posts 4 |
Being home is a safe feeling, Warm and cozy inside Like hot chocolate on a cold day Fits like a glove. It's like that old T-shirt Worn, just beyond perfection So comfortable you could wear it Forever and ever. Snuggling in front of a fire Laughter and tears Good times and bad Where your heart is safe Where time stands still. There as you grow Constant and true Memories and dreams Hopes and wishes come true  [This message has been edited by Stacieness (edited 03-16-2000).] |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
Well other than fact you can write free verse, I'd say you have your Mom's gift for words. (*wink*@Nan) This was a great read, I too love home. Welcome Stacie. ~X~ |
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Justin Thyme Member
since 1999-09-13
Posts 216Oz |
Hey, Miss StaciNESS! This poem brings me happiNESS! Makes ya wanna settle down with a big glass of not NESStle's Quick, y'know? And cuddle up with the blanky out of the wilderNESS of life! I like these lines best: "Good Thymes and bad" and "Where Thyme stands still". Obviously, you've inherited some of mom's artistic talents! Welcome to Passions!JT. Just me. Recent escapee. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Welcome to Passions, Stacie. You'll find us a lot like that old comfy shirt you never want to take off I hope. Wonderful poem. Michael |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
oooooooooo i hope you stay ooooooo i hope you do!! |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
The simplicity of home is beautiful and something that can never be replaced.  My favorite thought in this poem is that your heart is always safe there. That, to me, is very true. Welcome. It is wonderful to "meet" you. I can see you and your mother are both very blessed. *Jenn* |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Stacie, welcome to passions! We've seen the talent that runs in your family with Nan's work and your grandmother's work. Nice to finally read something from you. (don't mind wayoutwalt, he's just drooling!).... I look forward to reading more from you!!! Please check your email for a special welcome!  [This message has been edited by Poet deVine (edited 03-16-2000).] |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Welcome This is wonderful, and I also wanted to say that I thought "Copper Care" was excellent!! Thank you so much for sharing your work. This poem reminded me of some of my happier times, thanks |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
WELCOME Stacy! Sure does run in the family. I liked this very much, hope to see more |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
This had that comfy feel to it...very much enjoyed!!! WELCOME!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Stacy a big warm welcome to ya Lovely read, most enjoyable. LoL tracie Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Hey CBK #1...(cute blonde kid #1) Nice to see you think home is a good place... Was it home that was good, or the old T-shirt full of holes?? Your home is good, too... What time is dinner? I want my corned beef & cabbage... It's Shamrock Day  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome to Passions, Stacie! I see talent runs in the family! This is lovely! Denise |
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