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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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~*~ Bird sits on power line Singing his little heart out Electrifying ~*~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge, your title expresses my feeling exactly...love to you from me. |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
*From the Vegetarian* AH!!!! That's so sad! (but it's cute) "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Marge, I like this alot, you sing so well. Cerenity |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Applauding  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie~ Right back at 'cha, hon. LoveBug~ Sweetie ... his SONG is ELECTRIFYING ... not electrified ! LOL !  Cerenity~ Thank you, sweet one. Hoot~ You send smiles my way ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Ravenlearns2fly Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 71 |
Marge I love the way you see the world around you!!! Raven |
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John Yaws Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 860Texas |
Ah! Margie, lass, an' wha' in the worl am I to do with ye? A bonnie bit of drollery. Aye, it is! |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Oh, my bad! Good thing for the bird, though... "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Raven~ Thanks, love. Was walking in the yard and there the little thing was ... just waiting to be written ! Aye ! Slinger~ Tis a question I've been wondering about also. Thank you, cowboy! Love ya' LoveBugger~ Glad to see that smile ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is cute, Marge! My mind at first saw 'electrified' too. Time to get new glasses! Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise~ Just a little Haiku from the heart of a bird lover. Glad you enjoyed. LOL on the glasses. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
~Marge This is tiny but oh so sweet LoL tracie Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tracie~ Thank you. It's a Haiku and tiny is the definitive. Try one. It's written with 5 syllables in first line. 7 in the second. and 5 in the third. It should follow the traditional Japanese form of relating to nature or a sudden event that catches you by surprise and gives you joy. E-mail me if you have any questions. For tonight I'm outta here. But will respond on the morning. Well .... sometime before noon. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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