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To Diet For |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Again we are frustrated By a cause that's all but lost Course of action contemplated Under night skies now star-crossed Forward movement is impeded As once more light fades to dark Where day has not succeeded Will night re-ignite the spark And the fire burn as brightly Once again when comes the morrow Fueled by doubt which is un-sightly Fanning flames of human sorrow Killing time we are consuming Things that may not be re-newed That is of course assuming We don't run out of food [This message has been edited by Dr.Moose1 (edited 03-15-2000).] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
You said it true now I am blue for my pretty days are full of haze Makes me think of the lyrics, what's to do about it? lets turn off the lights and go to sleep. Liked you poem Doc. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is great, Doc! Denise |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Yep - really good - I like the last stanza.... "Killing time we are consuming..." You never fail to catch my attention, Doc..  |
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