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Into the Blue |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
As the stars fall from the sky Down upon the blue and silent world I wipe the sleep from my eye, I don’t know the reason why, All the memories are of that girl Every sight and sound, taste and touch Comes cascading through a thickening haze Everything that ever meant so much Every dream of senseless things and such Forever seen through these nights and days And if I ever dared to see Those things which I try to hide All I ever was and all I ever longed to be Is now coming back to me A part I thought had finally died Into the blue I fall into No rhyme nor reason No change of season Into the blue [This message has been edited by JML (edited 03-15-2000).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Down upon the blue and silent world I wipe the sleep from my eye, I don’t know the reason why, All the memories are of that girl ----------- And if I ever dared to see Those things which I try to hide All I ever was and all I ever longed to be Is now coming back to me A part I thought had finally died -------------- jer, this is SO perfect...and so full of your sensitivity...the thing I love most about your poems... she's a very lucky girl... stalking you with pleasure, your jm |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I hate it when I get the blues...nice writing. James |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I think if you look, you will find many colors in your own eyes....Sometimes the best poetry comes from those blue days. Nicely done! |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
This one just rolls smoothly~ Very nice work JML~ Marie~ "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind; And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
JML--this is a SONG--a nice blues tune at that...(serenity types while listening to Sonny Boy Williamson...) Once again, Nice work. Thanks. |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
thank ya'll kindly...*L* |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful poem! Well done! Denise |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
JML, This is Beautiful!!!! You did a remarkable job on this, very touching. I loved it!! Thank you for sharing it  |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
This is very creative and also sad  |
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