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Open Poetry #6

The Dawning

nona
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since 2000-03-03

Posts 139
Fla

0 posted 2000-03-15 07:44 AM

Slowly the tight grip of night is peeled away
from it's tight grip upon the earth.
As the sharpness softens, the pace quickens
as the creatures of the night finish their tasks
that require the cloak of darkness
Ending in the great cresendo
of the dawn bursting through......nona

[This message has been edited by nona (edited 03-15-2000).]

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2000-03-15 08:14 AM

Nona~
Oh, I like this.
I love the dawn.
Very pretty and inspiring, indeed.

Dawns without warning
Bringing light to my morning
Sunrise glows again

~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Denise

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since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

2 posted 2000-03-15 04:21 PM

This is beautiful, Nona! Simply beautiful!!

Denise

Alwye

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since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

3 posted 2000-03-16 10:42 PM

Indeed very beautiful!

*Krista Knutson*

~*Only when trudging through the soul's darkest midnight can one truly appreciate the glory of the sunrise*~

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