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nona
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0 posted 2000-03-15 07:40 AM



The Fight
I'd rather be fishing than stuck in here.
Sitting in my boat with a nice cold beer.
The work I do seldom gets a cheer.
No one seems to notice I fear
Fear not the lack of cheers just now
You'll get your rewards someday, somehow
The Lord sees your efforts for your fight,your plight
He'll reward you fourfold but after the fight..
                                  nona

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Denise
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1 posted 2000-03-15 04:19 PM


It can be such a struggle, this fight, can't it? Great poem, Nona!

Denise

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2 posted 2000-03-15 06:52 PM


I do believe He will reward us in the end for what we do now. Question is: How many will get those rewards? good poem
nona
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3 posted 2000-03-15 09:18 PM


Hard to sometimes remember that someone does notice out efforts & believes in us even when we don't believe in ourselves. Thanks for your coments


 

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