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Silent Desire
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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Silent Desire Feel feathered strokes upon your flesh with luminous kisses from the crescent moon, hungrily devouring smooth as satin you. My eyes hunger the beauty and iridescent glow before me. butterfly sensations on this dreamlike night, captures anxious, passionate breathless…breath and silent desire battles lustful apetite….. only to surrender. Dark Angel 2000 < !signature--> What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 03-14-2000).] |
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LittleBoyLost Junior Member
since 2000-03-14
Posts 28 |
Wow! I wish I was him!  Very hot! |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Free verse master ya are Angel! heheh Well done, looks like you have an admirer! hahah LOL |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Beautiful words, images and form...incredible job...Now as I said, spice it up and come over to the Adult Forum!!!  |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
DA, I always marvel at the care and time that you take to make your poems look as good as they sound. . . truely you take time with your craft. . . Reminds me of cummings. . . my personal favorite. . . the words are excellent and the form is wonderful. . . And like DeVine said. . . spice it up and come over to Adult. . . we have a place already reserved for you!! ------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Dark Angel! Denise |
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jazzgal Junior Member
since 2000-03-07
Posts 37 |
My last poem for the night... put a smile in my face, because it reminded me of cummings (fave poet), with your style and grace! |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Soul Sis - this is SUPERB!!! OK? NO arguing!! I am so proud of you - honestly hon...this has a magical quality to it. butterfly sensations on this dreamlike night, captures anxious, passionate breathless…breath yep - gorgeous. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Dark Angel this is very nice and desirable..James |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DarkAngel~ This poem graces the page with silken desire. Positively scrumptious. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Littlelostboy, WOW I wish I was him too thank you for sweet reply.----------------- Free Verse master I don't think so Angel, but your such a sweetie for saying so .  thank you for your lovely compliment. ----------------- Sharon thank you for your lovey reply, I can't spice this one up,it's meant tot stay this way, but I'll certainly try another for you ----------------- Sven thank you so very much for your lovely reply. Like I said to Sharon, I'll certainly try ----------------- Thank you so much Denise. ----------------- Jazzgirl, I'm glad that my poem was able to put a smile on your face . thank you ----------------- Soul-Sis, I don't know what to say.. ummm Idon't know if it is Superb, but I won't argue with you, just want to say thanks for "showing me the ropes" with freeverse, I am really enjoying this style. I am glad you loved it honey. thank you.------------------ jmlee12345, thank you, glad you liked it ------------------ Marge scrumptiouos hey? well I'm glad you enjoyed. Thank you for your lovely reply.What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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