navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #6 » Climax (a haiku)
Open Poetry #6
Post A Reply Post New Topic Climax (a haiku) Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
bboog
Member
since 2000-02-29
Posts 303
Valencia, California

0 posted 2000-03-14 02:04 PM


Emerald green eyes.
Widening, upward, glowing.
Sexy semaphores.



© Copyright 2000 Robert Boog - All Rights Reserved
jbouder
Member Elite
since 1999-09-18
Posts 2534
Whole Sort Of Genl Mish Mash
1 posted 2000-03-14 02:24 PM


b-

I'm still thinking about this one which means, at least to me, that you've done a good job with this one.  Eyes as semaphores ... hmmm.  

Jim

INclan
Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024
Indiana, USA
2 posted 2000-03-14 04:48 PM


BBoog,

Nicely done.  There is indeed something about green eyes that is enchanting.  I applaud your use of semaphore.  While not in common usage...the word is exactly correct.  I see that you were not the least bit subtle about it...lol

INclan

Local Rebel
Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767
Southern Abstentia
3 posted 2000-03-14 04:52 PM


boogie baby.... very cool
Corinne
Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167
state of confusion
4 posted 2000-03-14 04:58 PM



Awesome, bboog!

Cor


LittleBoyLost
Junior Member
since 2000-03-14
Posts 28

5 posted 2000-03-14 08:12 PM


I agree with jbouder and INclan.  Semaphore is the perfect word for green eyes.  Thank you.
bboog
Member
since 2000-02-29
Posts 303
Valencia, California
6 posted 2000-03-15 02:33 AM


To Jim, INclan,Local Reb,Cor & LBoyL, Thank you all for taking your time to read and respond. Your donations are tax deductible of course. Now back to reading Harry Potter to my sons!
best regards,
bboog

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #6 » Climax (a haiku)

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary