Open Poetry #6 |
Climax (a haiku) |
bboog Member
since 2000-02-29
Posts 303Valencia, California |
Emerald green eyes. Widening, upward, glowing. Sexy semaphores. |
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jbouder Member Elite
since 1999-09-18
Posts 2534Whole Sort Of Genl Mish Mash |
b- I'm still thinking about this one which means, at least to me, that you've done a good job with this one. Eyes as semaphores ... hmmm. Jim |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
BBoog, Nicely done. There is indeed something about green eyes that is enchanting. I applaud your use of semaphore. While not in common usage...the word is exactly correct. I see that you were not the least bit subtle about it...lol INclan |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
boogie baby.... very cool |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Awesome, bboog! Cor |
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LittleBoyLost Junior Member
since 2000-03-14
Posts 28 |
I agree with jbouder and INclan. Semaphore is the perfect word for green eyes. Thank you. |
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bboog Member
since 2000-02-29
Posts 303Valencia, California |
To Jim, INclan,Local Reb,Cor & LBoyL, Thank you all for taking your time to read and respond. Your donations are tax deductible of course. Now back to reading Harry Potter to my sons! best regards, bboog |
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