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My Trip To the Caribbean as if I'd Already Been (I'm Leaving Today!)
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My Trip To the Caribbean as if I'd Already Been (I'm Leaving Today!) |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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Snorkel attached to mask; he has flippers but no fin Big boy strolls on the beach, as natives tend to grin Always the landlubber but today just look at him Expert looking dorkus doesn't even know how to swim One foot in the ocean and one foot on the land Trembling big boy, will the fish there understand? You'd think he faced a madman, terrorizing Libyan Instead of on the beach somewhere in the Caribbean His wife was asleep, somewhere, sun-tanning. No! Not nude! The natives like a tourist who wear things loud just not lewd Would all the salt in the ocean keep this big boy afloat? Or would this be the last poem this landlubber e'er wrote I'm still writing I'm still writing the shark and the eel Might have bit me a bit but I was numb and couldn't feel For all of it was paid for, the bar and the buffet So big boy was big all right keeping fish there at bay I brought snapshots back to prove I kissed the mighty whale And bit the bottom of a piranha and lived to tell the tale But my wife already told you before I could caught her That big boy can't get past ankle deep in the ocean water OH YUH! [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 03-30-2000).] |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
LOL, this is great Walt! What a laugh! Exellent work!  *Krista Knutson* I do this so this world will know that it will not change me....-GB |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Yeah - well - I heard that he just hangs out in the 'kiddie' end of the pool.....  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
ROFL.....this is hillarious Walt! Very entertaining!!!  Denise |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Wayout, you are too funny! Hilarious poem! Corinne |
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Mistikman Senior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 682San Jose, CA, USA |
LOL, I love your style walt, this is excellent  I am not a poet, I am merely one who speaks in emotion |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
thanx guys oman i am goin to cozymel end o march i cant swim but i ot those bar and buffets down pat! |
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Nurse Crachet Member
since 1999-09-27
Posts 318They know where I am! |
Walt, We have a room with some Cheerio's waiting, sorry no flounder. Excellent poem, had me laughing. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
LOL...this must be ocean poetry night! LOL.. I love the image of you standing terrified, ankle deep in the waves!!! Cute. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
just wanted to see this one have another go around im shameless i know |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Well thank you! You're the best Walt. Reading your work is like deja vu. Feel like I've partied with you before. Funny, funny, man... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Shameless Walt~ Thanks for dragging this one back by the nets. Sure was a good catch for me ! Nothing like wading in and getting your feet wet. LOL at the image! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
ROFL!!! What a vision you've described here! hahahah Walt twas a good'n! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Hey, I'm lovin' your poetry. It's good for the spirit. Liz |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
i'm leavin today no passions for almost a week sadnees yuh but o yuh cozumel here my wife and i come |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Have a great time!! I'm sure your wife and Cozumel will keep you from missing us too much!! We'll be here when you get back with your vacation inspired poetry! Have fun! Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
ROFL...have a great time |
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