Open Poetry #6 |
pandemonium |
infinat3 sadn3ss Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 85somerset england |
That little place between heaven and hell. where your eyes bulge and your ears swell. am i here? or am i there? To all this hate, only love can compare. Where you only laugh, after an eternity you have cried. When you can only tell the truth, After a lifetime of lies. Insane is this place, Smiles on every face. Twisted and warped is my rigamorted corpse so hungry , i could eat a horse. sheer bedlam pandemonium [This message has been edited by infinat3 sadn3ss (edited 03-13-2000).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I've had days like that too! Good poem! Denise |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Cabe !!!!! great poem, I love the wording it says so much and is so deep, we all feel like that occasionaly . With poetry as your weapon - express your iner feelings so all may carry your sorrow, united as one . |
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mete out Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 270england |
***Cabes, You have such an incredible talent, and you display it so well in everything that you write, say, and do. This one is great. In some ways it reminds me of dear old Sylvia. You ought to know by now that I mean all this and I'm not just saying it... Love Lou xxx I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it. |
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PericolosoAmore Junior Member
since 2000-04-14
Posts 31 |
What can I say, nicely worded. i like it, i like it a lot. P.A. |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Hi ! You can be where you want. You can't put your legs in two different boats at the sametime. When the current is two strong you'll be swept away. Take your time to decide. Life is wonderful with all the loving people and it needn't be harsh. Sincerely A_L |
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