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infinat3 sadn3ss
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since 2000-02-14
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somerset england

0 posted 2000-03-13 04:30 PM


That little place between heaven and hell.
where your eyes bulge and your ears swell.
am i here?
or am i there?
To all this hate,
only love can compare.
Where you only laugh,
after an eternity you have cried.
When you can only tell the truth,
After a lifetime of lies.

Insane is this place,
Smiles on every face.
Twisted and warped
is my rigamorted corpse
so hungry , i could eat a horse.
sheer bedlam
pandemonium



[This message has been edited by infinat3 sadn3ss (edited 03-13-2000).]

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Denise
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1 posted 2000-03-13 06:29 PM


I've had days like that too! Good poem!

Denise

angelswing
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since 2000-02-10
Posts 705
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2 posted 2000-03-24 05:11 AM


Cabe !!!!! great poem, I love the wording it says so much and is so deep, we all feel like that occasionaly .


 With poetry as your weapon - express your iner feelings so all may carry your sorrow, united as one .

mete out
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 270
england
3 posted 2000-03-24 09:52 AM


***Cabes,
You have such an incredible talent, and you display it so well in everything that you write, say, and do.
This one is great.
In some ways it reminds me of dear old Sylvia.
You ought to know by now that I mean all this and I'm not just saying it...
  Love Lou  xxx


 I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it.


PericolosoAmore
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since 2000-04-14
Posts 31

4 posted 2000-05-08 04:24 PM


What can I say, nicely worded.
i like it, i like it a lot.
P.A.

amazon_lover
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since 2000-04-09
Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland
5 posted 2000-05-09 04:04 PM


Hi !
You can be where you want. You can't put your legs in two different boats at the sametime. When the current is two strong you'll be swept away. Take your time to decide. Life is wonderful with all the loving people and it needn't be harsh.

Sincerely
A_L

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