Open Poetry #6 |
never come running |
infinat3 sadn3ss Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 85somerset england |
I know what you are trying to do, and i will never falter . I can see what you are trying to prove but i will never alter .. ..myself for you. However much i cry, ill never stop to ask myself "why". I am stronger than you think i am. I can crush the world in the palm of my hand. However much you say or do Ill never come running back to you. |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
You go Girl!!! Great poem and welcome to Passions!! Marina |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Great poem! Full of personal strength and conviction! I like it! Denise |
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infinat3 sadn3ss Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 85somerset england |
thanks guys.but marina,im a bloke. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This is good writing...James |
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mete out Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 270england |
Way to go Cable! Fantastic one is this. You keep this frame of mind because i KNOW you are capable of just about anything... Love ya...Lou xx I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it. |
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Enola Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 138England |
You ARE a hell of a long stronger than she is. You don't need her anyway because you've got us. Your best poem yet, I think - keep it up. The tragedy of it is that nobody sees the look of desperation on my face. Thousands and thousands of us, and we're passing one another without a look of recognition. |
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