Open Poetry #6 |
Evermore My Rose |
Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
I take you gently in my arms. ...and feel your warm embrace, As light of heaven's stars above, ...shine down upon your face. I see the glow of all my dreams, ...within your beauty there, I touch upon moon's silver beams, ...as stroke your silken hair. I hear sweet music of the muse, ...we dance throughout the night, Free as the summer winds that blow, ...our hearts as one unite. You are my goddess, Aphrodite, ...you touch within my soul, And leave therein a satin bloom, ...a rose that makes me whole. Am touched by splendor of the rose, ...as hear your siren's song, Breathing in your fragrant scent, ...I capture all I long. Elysian delights unfold, ...sweet treasures lay inside, Then from the east the rising sun, ...day's portal opens wide. As sun's first rays steal through the trees, ... morn chases way the night, You gently place your lips on mine, ...I taste of love's delight. I whisper softly to the wind, ...I'll love her evermore, I'll sing to you love's madrigal, ...I'll love you evermore. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sigh...the splendor of your love of Rose poetry is unequaled. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is so romantically beautiful as are all your Rose poems! Beautiful!! Denise |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Sigh! There could never be a lovelier poem! This is so beautiful...you sir are a romantic poet of the truest sense.... |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
A rose by any other name... You've heard of the "Rose Queen"? I hereby dub thee the "Rose King"... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mike~ I'll take a dozen! FTD is fine. Credit Cards welcomed. Loved it in case you couldn't tell. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Romanticly beautiful |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
So beautiful..you've left me breathless. So romantic, the words just swept me away.. *Krista Knutson* I do this so this world will know that it will not change me....-GB |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Wooo~ That sent my pulse racing~ Your poem was absolutely breathtaking~ Whew!~ Marie~ "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind; And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard |
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MyPenNameIsSam Member
since 2000-03-06
Posts 94usa |
beautiful beautiful beautiful -molly aka sam "One does not discover new lands without consenting to lose sight of the shore for a very long time." -Andre Gide |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Mike, I am in shock at the beauty and romance. This is a work of ART, Thank you so much I will remember this one forever... Cerenity |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Thank you all so kindly for your replies. I do have a thing for roses. |
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angel girl Member
since 1999-07-23
Posts 322within a whisper... |
Wonderful! Beautiful! And, oh, so romantic. One touch of nature makes the whole world kin. -William Shakespeare |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
I love the style in which you write sir...so easy to read, and so easy to be swept away by your words...Not too many men are capable of doing that....writing with such intense passion. Your words are so magical, they dazzle any who read. Your poems are never long enough for me...just when I'm being swept away, they end! LOL Please, quit your day job, and write more!!! LOL |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
You had me with the title and kept me with rest, this one went straight to my heart. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Sing to loves song, Thy heart longs to hear, The nightingale awaits, For thy whispers in her ear, I have yearned for thee, thy style of poetry, Forever leaves its mark, unto this fair maiden, A Romantic Heart, For you and I are not of this century, We meet from days of the past, From the era of Shakespeares time, Where our souls were once entwined... Breath takeing.....sooo romantic and beautiful, passionate, I copied this one for keeps!! < !signature--> "Love is not love Which alters when it alteration finds, Or bends with the remover to remove. O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (edited 03-22-2000).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I really liked this its sooooo smooth and romantic..I was reading it out loud and when I arrived at the line "I whisper softly to the wind..I'll love her evermore" I was really touched. James |
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