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A Soft place to Fall
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A Soft place to Fall |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
A Soft place to Fall So many years, we let slip by taking two roads not knowing why I need you now soon making a call tonight I look for a soft place to fall there were heartaches from lovers past looking for meaning none there to last in you I knew and always saw a warm heart and a soft place to fall didn't mean to hurt you then so long ago feelings that swept me unsure to know you knew me best it seems after all coming to you for a soft place to fall you're always waiting with tender embrace always a smile upon your face in my eyes I see you standing so tall there to give me a soft place to fall when nights are over and comes the dawn before the daylight you know I'll be gone until the next time when I make that call when again needing a soft place to fall |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
I love this Danny, I think perhaps this person is more than just a soft place to fall?? Very nice I really enjoyed this one. Marina |
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Shelley Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 263Ohio, USA |
It seems as though you have found a very soft place to fall. This reads very beautiful. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lovely poem! How nice to have someone you can count on this way. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Lovely, sir! I like the poem and the format.. very nice read!  |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Excellent!!!! Your work is exquisite and so touching. I loved every touching line. Thank you for writing and for sharing it. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, Danny Boy~ How beautiful, tender and touching. You take my breath clean away with this one. You romantic, you. Love it ... just love it. May open arms be there when you need 'a soft place to fall.' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
A beautiful poem Danny  |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
We all should have that soft place to fall~ What a beautiful heartfelt poem~ Marie~ "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind; And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard |
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MyPenNameIsSam Member
since 2000-03-06
Posts 94usa |
Perhaps you've realized this person is more than simply a soft place to fall? I used to have someone in my life that I thought of as a "soft place to fall",...though I didn't fully realize that I viewed him in exactly this manner until he was tired of being my "soft place to FALL" instead of my "soft place to STAY"...just a thought...your poem made me remember... Beautiful poem.... -molly aka sam< !signature--> "One does not discover new lands without consenting to lose sight of the shore for a very long time." -Andre Gide [This message has been edited by MyPenNameIsSam (edited 03-14-2000).] |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Danny, This is lovely. Such sweet and honest words to describe this moment with someone who seems to know you well. Enjoyed this very much. |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
Danny, so melancholy in its way yet romantic. Very beautiful and touching. May you always have a soft place to fall. Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream. Shawna R. Holder Boise, Idaho |
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PanDol Senior Member
since 2000-03-11
Posts 1245USA |
Hey Danny, this was truly beautiful! I love it. I got goose bumps while I was reading it! I seem to recall just not to long ago, you told me you were not very talented.....I beg to differ my dear! This was writen with much talent and feeling! [This message has been edited by PanDol (edited 03-14-2000).] |
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Shelley Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 263Ohio, USA |
this part keeps running through my head... you knew me best it seems after all coming to you for a soft place to fall It makes it seem more like a safe place to fall. |
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Deb Lynne Member
since 1999-08-19
Posts 180Where blue skies meet blue ocean |
DH...if there is a woman waiting to catch you and let you fall, she has a soft spot for you! Treat her with kindness! Loved this one! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
some things are SO good...they require a second time around...(smile)... I was doing a little forum search on you...  I wanted to see what I had missed... I would have really missed out not seeing this one... PERFECTION...very nice...with your usual sensitive touch. thanks for yesterdays smiles Danny. take care, jm BACK TO THE TOP>>>>>>> ...when you walked into the room, I saw their faces, you made it feel like time was standing still...and I felt fascination... then you turned and smiled in my direction... and my heart...gave me away. glass tiger |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
I love your poem very much!!!!!!I enjoy reading your work! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Very senimental and romantic, with that soft touch, of course, and excellent writing, all make for a pleasant read. Liz |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Your poetry just keeps getting better and better m'friend!!! Such softness is always heartwarming...you're quite a character sir!! Very well done!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Just stopping in for another read of this lovely verse |
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just_another_fe Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483MICHIGAN |
Its beautiful Danny but we wouldn't exspect anything less from the best  good job |
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Suzanne Junior Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 18Florida |
this was a really good poem. i think we can all relate to it, everyone has thier "soft place to fall". i really enjoyed this poem. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
I don't know how I missed this one before Danny, but this is exceptional. Wow... Michael |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
This is so beautifully written - I love it! Roniece  |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
I am truly honored by the many responses to this poem. Too many to name and thank, just know, all of you, that I appreciate the time you took to read my work. There are so many beautiful poems posted each day and to have such response to one of mine is incredibly special and inspiring. Thanks to each of you, especially Hoot and Shelley for responding twice and to Janet Marie for making a discovery. Danny [This message has been edited by Danny Holloway (edited 04-05-2000).] |
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Esmeralda Ponsonby Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 138 |
Sir Holloway, Sounds like she's delighted with your castle too, offering you a soft place to fall. together the softness can be a journey to paradise. |
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hsystems Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 319Murray, UT, USA |
Danny - WOW! This is the first of your poems that I am aware of having read, and I wonder what took me so long! Your gift is truly a treasure - thanks so much for sharing it with the rest of us! I, too, have had someone in my life who was a "soft place to fall." But, in contrast to some of the previous comments, she and I were actually just incredibly good friends, neither of us wanting more than that. In fact, when she fell in love with a very good man and he asked her to marry him, she asked my permission! Thanks again for sharing your beautiful gift!  Troy Beautiful, Thought-Provoking Poetry http://www.h-systems.net/p1.htm |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
dont ya just love poetic fate(smile) I just love when others prove my point for me. I just love being right (it dont happen very often) LOLthank you danny-boy...I'm glad I made this discovery too... jm ...when you walked into the room, I saw their faces, you made it feel like time was standing still...and I felt fascination... then you turned and smiled in my direction... and my heart...gave me away. glass tiger |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is great, Danny... well done! |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Danny....did not get to read this sooner. Wow, I almost missed a gem!!! This is wonderful!! Back to the top you go!!! Beautiful flow and format!!! Loved it.Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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beautiful_stranger New Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 3 |
Hi, this is beautiful particularly because it can be applied to so many relationships. I decided to send it to my boyfriend to tell him he was my 'soft place'. Thanks for creating such a perfect gift to give. Beautiful stranger |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Danny, Very well done. You pull the reader into the emotions. So, please don't take you special friend for granted. Lovely, nice. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Me thinks you need to work less and write more...ya know *kiss* *kiss* BEH BEG |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful |
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Shelley Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 263Ohio, USA |
I hope the softness you found still holds true Danny!! |
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Shelley Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 263Ohio, USA |
I just re-read this (twice) still as beautiful as the first time I read it. |
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