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PEACEMAKER Junior Member
since 2000-03-11
Posts 19Sydney N.S.W Australia |
Here i stand all alone with no one here to hear me moan i woke today to find i lost something close to me but not to death or oversea i have a thirst for knowledge with ever breath i take you showed me something we all should know sometimes people try to hard i know you left with course so i now forgive u because? of all u showed if only you had shown me this right from the very start we may have been together now you near to hear me moan Your gentle touch, your loving voice where like the summer breeze all now just memories which fell so distant from me seeing it from other eyes i wouldn't' change a thing standing here all alone no one here to hear me moan But looking through my hart at this i'v seen i did you wrong i know i never filled my half so there always was that hole ever word u said to me ever song you sang used to make my laugh and smile now all that has gone if you sung it differently would make me look back on all the things i'v said and done I need you back right by my side to sing me one last song and show me that you have forgiven me even if our loves not strong still i stand all alone no one near to hear me moan __________ I know you love me o so much thats why it can not be for you were only second best my true love is unseen yes i have forgiven you for all the thing your done Now the you have sang your song i realise me true love i see i'v done you wrong i know i didn't fill hey half so there was always a hole no specal bonds or chains we tie not our loves not strong im happy your forgiven me for all i'v said and done now i stand hear all alone Looking for my my unseen love when it was so near the one place i didn't look because i fell such a fear __________ So here we are together strong nothing else to fear all that left for us to do learn each other more from this our love will grow and we'll part no more still we stand all alone but our love has made us one [This message has been edited by PEACEMAKER (edited 03-13-2000).] |
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Astraea Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 378California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now |
Welcome to Passions! This is a truly a lovely poem, long too, but that's okay. It's worth it, with the talent. Very nice. ~Astraea "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness." "Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things." |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
This is quite a first entry - Check your email for a special welcome...  |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
Excellent 1st entry...welcome to Passions. Chris Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Welcome to passions  |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
I like your poem. Welcome to the family |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I can see your heart is in this poem. Welcome to Passions. |
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Shelley Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 263Ohio, USA |
What a delightful journey you have taken me on! Welcome to Passions! |
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