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Dr.Moose1
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0 posted 2000-03-12 07:33 PM


We're not yet half of what we'll be
No future path holds claim you'll see
Intrinsic ways divine our course
Of colors we're a different horse

Shares of gifts we part to few
Now free given nothing due
Lest befall on us my friends
What was before , repeat again


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Nan
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1 posted 2000-03-12 10:10 PM


I had to read this
and read it
and read it again....
A vicious cycle

and well done, it is....

devina
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2 posted 2000-03-12 10:19 PM


Few words that require some thought m'friend...very well done!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

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