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Gray Skies |
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RodNY17 New Member
since 2000-02-09
Posts 1 |
Gray Skies I don't know how I've been surviving, In this cold and empty world for all this time. I've been searching and crying. I've been hurt and dying. Looking for that very person that could keep me alive. There are many things I wish I didn't do, The are many situations I wish I didnt go through, But everyday I pray that someday my skies won't be as gray, and that when I open my eyes, I won't see a man, or all those people pointing at me for not seeing the magic behind the secret, and feeling blue, cuz all they can see is a guy without a clue. And once again, I travel on the same lonely road, feeling empty and different, but not because I've killed or because I'm cruel, but for daring not following societies so called rules. So today I've finally found peace, in my heart at least. I've gone to a better place, where I can just be free. And I'll rest from a life of pain, hoping people will one day open their minds and make the world a better place, or at least judge us not for what we are, but maybe for the mistakes we've made |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! Nice entry poem here.. thought provoking to be sure. Please check your email!  |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
RodNY~ WELCOME! This is really good.Makes one stop and think.  -SEA |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Wonderful poem! Welcome to passions! Did Jesus laugh? I think He did, 'cause He was once a little kid; and all of us were made with joy both sugar-spice girl and snake-snail boy! |
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fool Member
since 2000-02-07
Posts 61 |
this is really a compelling piece,great poem. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Welcome!!!!! This got me thinking... Just remember with gray skies, comes lot of beautiful rain!!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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