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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA 
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I’ve loved you from the very start Didn’t mean to break your heart No matter how you think and feel My love for you is very real. To stray across anticipation Cross onto contamination The lines of trust were drawn so clear And now the lines a gone. To wish that thought had played a part And stopped whit is before the start It’s done and there’s no turning back I’d give my all to change it. I guess I’ve learned what love is for Without it life is but a whore Looking for a way out. I’ll pay the price for bad advice To myself |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Spiked~ Owwie! Tough lesson learned, huh? You've expressed it well. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
thanks marge. Most lessons in life are hard. We learn and move on. Rich |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Great poem. Well written! Denise |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Thanks Denise, Your words are well received. Rich |
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MyPenNameIsSam Member
since 2000-03-06
Posts 94usa |
It's so hard when trust is lost,... everything seems to turn into a never-ending battle, a constant cycle once trust has been lost the first time. It's so difficult to gain trust back... but just keep trying and perhaps you'll be able to receive it again  good luck!-molly aka sam "One does not discover new lands without consenting to lose sight of the shore for a very long time." -Andre Gide |
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