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RobertB
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0 posted 2000-03-12 09:41 AM




Questions to answers
distant with applause born
on waves opaque..... cataracted
eyes blinking back the light
as darkness stilled emotions
sift through fingers numb
by love enflamed of itself…
an infected wound of isolation.


Robert

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Meadowmuse
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1 posted 2000-03-12 09:51 AM


I can sense the pleasure in store for me whenever I spy your sobriquet ...this piece holds true to form. Very nice.

~ Claire

Marilyn
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2 posted 2000-03-12 10:08 AM


A very apt discription my friend. Well written.  
hoot_owl_rn
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3 posted 2000-03-12 10:34 AM


Wow Robert...this one certainly packs a punch with it  
Poet deVine
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4 posted 2000-03-12 05:05 PM


Wow. I understand....great poem!
Martie
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5 posted 2000-03-12 05:33 PM


You say so much in so few.  
Great poem!

Denise
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6 posted 2000-03-12 06:26 PM


I agree! This is great Robert!

Denise

RobertB
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7 posted 2000-03-12 08:03 PM


Thanks you guys.......been there done that ya know......online I mean and off.

Claire, what in the world is a sobriquet????

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Meadowmuse
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8 posted 2000-03-12 11:05 PM


Robert, sobriquet just means your byline, your pen name. Sorry 'bout that...

Wonderful writing!  

~ Claire

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9 posted 2000-03-12 11:25 PM


Haunting music
plays from the CD at my side
tears roll gently down my cheeks,
tears I cannot hide
the world is so much larger,
cybernetically
but oh, how I wish
I could feel you dance with me.

I long to feel the length of you,
your arm around my waist
long to sway to the tune,
hands together, fingers laced
soon, the song will end,
another in it’s place
the dance will end again
without a glimpse of your face.

Dance with me tonight,
across the cyber seas
hold me in your arms,
give my hand a squeeze
close your eyes as we dance
by internet’s design
you, there in your world,
I here in mine.

RobertB
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10 posted 2000-03-13 06:19 PM


wow PDV.....very accurate in description..

memories......

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