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Incomprehensible You
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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Incomprehensible You Moving pictures... plays on the screen of my mind Sitting in the back row I watch incomprehensible you Rainbow colours locked away stripped and faded to grey Black upon white I sit and stare at the confused state of us A silent movie but... actions speak louder than words I hear you My love.. loud and clear. Dark Angel 2000 < !signature--> What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 03-11-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DarkAngel~ This poem is stark-naked emotion. Sensitively portrayed. It flickers across the screen. Wonderful job, gal. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Excellent work, Angel. How different life can look when we view it as if it were on the screen. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
You have the most incredible way with words this too is fantastic.  Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Girl, I think Marge said it well! You've put some raw emotions into some fantastic poetry! Hang in there! ~HUGS~ |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This is one of your best, DA...wonderful poem...you have a way with free verse that I envy!  |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Great free verse here DA...love the symbolism |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
An excellent poem! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I agree, Dark Angel. Excellent poem expressing real pain. Well done. Denise |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
DA. . . you have indeed captured the pain of life. . . sometimes, it does feel like a movie doesn't it? ----------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Actions do speak louder than words...you've captured quite an emotion with this one!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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