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Nostalgia Gardens |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648
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A glance, a touch are planted seed Warm words abundant rain a shower Upon heart’s soil quenching need Beneath love’s brightly glowing power. Thoughts dancing lightly through the mind Elusive butterflies aflutter They each impart their special kind Of joy, distinct one from the other. In gardens rife with opulence Alighting gently on its flowers They speak each one a circumstance In time, dew-kist and fragrant hours. Nostalgia gardens’ vibrant hues Arrayed in all love’s finest splendor Within the soul ‘though time ensues More lovely grow – and so forever. Denise And slight is the sting of his trouble Whose winnings are less than his worth; For he who is honest is noble, Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~ |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
"and so forever..." beautiful Denise...I loved it. |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Denise, See babysitting for your Grandchildren does wonders for your mind, this is beautiful, thanks for sharing. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Denise--you have planted a lovely garden with your words. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise~  This is as pretty a bouquet as one could hope to find in any garden. I feel like FTD just delivered. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
This flows so beautifully, Denise. May your garden always be in full bloom  |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Beautiful Denise..I love this one! I could cleary see a beautiful garden! Marina |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Beautiful! You are the white rose in the middle of a garden of red! "Love is not love Which alters when it alteration finds, Or bends with the remover to remove. O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh this is beautiful Denise... Well Done. What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
Well done Denise...well done. Chris Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Thank you Rob, Gloria, Martie, Marge (beautiful rose...thanks!), Balladeer, Marina, Romantic Heart, Dark Angel and Chris for reading and for your ever so kind replies! I appreciate it very much! Denise |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Denise you are such a doll! Thanks so much for such an enlighting piece of joy! Such beauty you describe Happy, happy! |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
denise this is beautiful and I enjoyed reading it very much LOL tracie Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
So light, peaceful, and beautiful, Denise. Just what this heart needs right now. Wonderful work, keep it up! *Krista Knutson* I do this so this world will know that it will not change me....-GB |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Amazing what beauty grows in our hearts and souls if we only allow it to. Beautiful verse my friend |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Denise, This poem shows the distinct'ness of your love as a person, may your garden forever bloom. Cerenity |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
This a beautiful poem, Dysnder. Your words were expressed so beautifully and the imagery was excellent! Nathan |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Thank you Rebecca, Tracie, Krista, Ruth, Cerenity and Nate for reading and commenting! I'm glad you liked it! Denise |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Denise what a beautiful garden you've shown us. You do miracles with words.  |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Your gentle words here propagate a lovely flowering of thought and imagination, Denise. Very, very nice. ~ Claire |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Thank you Munda and Claire for your lovely comments! I'm so glad that you liked it! Denise [This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 03-13-2000).] |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Your garden sounds beautiful Denise, can I stop by for a visit? |
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