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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia 
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Mum you gave me inspiration, you gave me my wing's I can fly to wherever I want and do almost anything You've shown me how to be a good person and a loving mum You helped make me who I am today and the person I've become You taught me right from wrong and helped me along the way You helped lift my spirits when my world sometimes seamed grey Your a wonderful mum an absolute angel and I strive to be like you And from your constant love and devotion my eternal wings grew  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tracie- A loving thought for your Mum. Very sweetly done. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Awonderful tribute for your Mum Tracie, Well Done! What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Beautiful and heartfelt. I am envious of any who may feel this way about their "mum". Michael |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Tracie~ How very loving! You must make your Mum's heart swell with pride!  -SEA |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Tracie: Sounds like you and your mum have a good relationship...bless...have you shown her this? Cause if you haven't I'll bet it makes her day.. HUGS The grape passes through the press to yield wine. Your life must pass through the press of passion and pain to yield the wine of wisdom.. |
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Adriahh Junior Member
since 2000-02-09
Posts 18 |
Aww this is really sweet I hope someday my kids write me something similar! |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Marge thanks for reading and replying DarkAngel lovely reply thanks Michael my mum is so wonderful and I'm very greatful to have a mum like her. Sea thanks for reading & replying RainbowGirl My mum has seen this I framed it & gave it to her for her birthday 2 years ago and she loved it. Adriahh I hope to that my daughter and I have the same relationship and respect for each other as I do with my mum thanks for your reply [This message has been edited by tracie66 (edited 02-11-2000).] |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
sniff yuh |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
wayoutwalt thanks for your reply...Tracie |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
A nice tribute to probably the most powerful influence in your life. I hope you shared this with her |
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Wizzard Member
since 2000-02-09
Posts 209 |
Tracie,this one should be on a Mother`s Day card. I hope you shared this with your mum? Very Nice Job Tracie < !signature-->Today is the first day of the rest of my life. [This message has been edited by Wizzard (edited 02-11-2000).] |
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Rosalind Palafox
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I love my mum also!!!! Aren't they all wonderful??? "Love comes but never goes, for if it ever went, it was never love to begin with." |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Ruth, I did share this with my mum and she loved it. She been a wonderful mum one I cherish dearly, Thanks for your reply. Dear wizzard Thankyou for your kind words I appreciate them. Rosalind you must have a mum like mine, I think we are very lucky. I hope I am just as wonderful as a mum, you can only try. |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
I been thinking a lot about mom lately as the 29th. is her birthday so tracie I chose this one. She was so dear to me and also a music companion as she taught me to play the piano and guitar, so many wonderful times to remember. Thanks for your RE:'s Forever Dale |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
This is an absolutely beautiful tribute to your mother! I'm going to send it to mine, and tell her I found it here. ~ ~ ~ Dear Dale - I'm so very, very sorry your mom is gone. She loved you so dearly and truly. I believe you were her favorite child, if I might dare to say that. I'm so glad we'll all be together again in Heaven. Love, Rosemary |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Tracie66, A touching and beautiful poem. A lovely read |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Dear Dale I'm touched that you chose this and I'm honoured also. You know alot of times we tend to take our mum's for granted and don't appreciated them until they are ill or no longer here with us, I try not to do that. You must miss your mum terribly, feel free to e-mail me if you want to talk. Hugs....Tracie~ Rosemary~ I'm also touched by your reply and I hope your mum like's this Tracie~ Sy~ I'm so glad you read this and I always appreciate your comments Tracie~ Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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