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Open Poetry #6

Fir Tree (a Haiku)

INclan
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since 1999-07-20

Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

0 posted 2000-03-11 11:46 AM

Fir tree bending low
Softly, warm lips touching mine
Foresight, The Sixth Sense

Please refer to this interesting challenge posted by Post deVine in poetry
challenge!

[This message has been edited by INclan (edited 03-11-2000).]

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2000-03-11 12:01 PM

Inclan~
Challenge or not .... this is
a lovely haiku.
You sure met PoetDV's challenge though.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Denise

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since 1999-08-22

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2 posted 2000-03-11 08:26 PM

I love it!

Denise

Joannak
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since 2000-03-11

Posts 121
Indiana, USA

3 posted 2000-03-11 11:44 PM

I can smell the fir, wet from a thunderstorm, perhaps? Lovely...

Joanna

INclan
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since 1999-07-20

Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

4 posted 2000-03-12 07:39 AM

Thank you all for your kind words. Joannak, I see this was your first post. Welcome to Passions.

INclan

kaile

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since 2000-02-06

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singapore

5 posted 2000-03-16 05:12 AM

this is so lovely!!you love haiku too...can't wait to read more of yours!!

Tenderheart
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since 2000-03-20

Posts 17

6 posted 2000-03-20 03:14 AM

Foresight? The sixth sense? And lips touching... yes! Much gratitude for this, INclan.

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