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Open Poetry #6

Army Daze- a haiku

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

0 posted 2000-03-11 04:42 AM

pls do refer to this interesting challenge posted by Post deVine in poetry challenge!

Army Daze

I drag my green mile
With a law tube on my back
Past one in the night

INclan
Senior Member

since 1999-07-20

Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

1 posted 2000-03-11 11:30 AM

Nicely done. Is this from personal experience?

A moment in time....

[This message has been edited by INclan (edited 03-11-2000).]

Mon Cherie

Senior Member

since 2001-10-31

Posts 922
Land of Never-ending Summers

2 posted 2001-12-05 12:44 PM

What's a law tube??? Is this one of your road march? Poor boy, you're missing out on your favourite activity - sleep.

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Florence

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