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Open Poetry #6

another attempt on haiku

kaile

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since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

0 posted 2000-03-11 04:09 AM

Reflections on a cloudy day

Candy floss,soft wool
fluffy white clouds in blue sky
scented angels fly

Balladeer

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

1 posted 2000-03-12 03:55 PM

I don't know how this one slipped by everyone. It is an excellent haiku. Very nice writing, kaile

Gene
Senior Member

since 2000-01-23

Posts 935
Colorado, USA

2 posted 2000-03-12 06:01 PM

I agree, i really love Haiku and this one is great. It seems like people are only posting haiku here, but I've been trying to get some interest going in the Pub. Please stop by.

~Gene

INclan
Senior Member

since 1999-07-20

Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

3 posted 2000-03-12 06:17 PM

Well Done! Keep up the good work.

INclan

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

4 posted 2000-03-12 06:21 PM

Another beauty, Kaile! Well done!

Denise

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