I was a cloud in the sky today

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Open Poetry #6

I was a cloud in the sky today

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

0 posted 2000-03-11 02:09 AM

I was a cloud in the sky today

I was a cloud in the sky today
did you not see me float your way?

I shaped myself as a heart for you
did you not see me as I grew?

And I dripped some drops of love
did you not see what I was made of?

I lingered at the sunset patiently
were you ever concious of me?

"...no single sound too rude
Upon thy slumber shall intrude,
Our thoughts, our souls- O God above!
In every deed shall mingle, love."
--Edgar Allan Poe (from Serenade)

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2000-03-11 05:27 AM

PoeMinister~
I like the cloud formations
you used here ...
'I lingered at the sunset patiently
were you ever concious of me?'

I'm an avid cloud watcher.
Appreciated muchly.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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